WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.

How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?

Her Voice

She moves like the storm clouds gathering,

Her words sharp as glass,

A restless kind of energy

That never seems to pass.

She speaks in sharp, impatient tones,

A smile that’s quick to fade,

Her laughter like a wick that snapsβ€”

A sound I can’t invade.

They all adore her every word,

Her charm, so quick and bright,

But to me it’s just a flicker,

A spark that burns too bright.

She thinks herself a force of light,

But I find it too much glare,

Her voice, a crackle in the dark,

While I breathe quieter air.

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