VISUAL PROMPT
by Joey Kyber @ Unsplash

Write a story or poem titled 'Chains'.
Hula Hoops
“Look daddy tiny hula hoops” exclaimed the child whose rosy cheeks seemed to shine despite the gloomy atmosphere.
The man smiled in-spite of himself. It had been seven years since those chains wreaked havoc upon his life. During the funeral, he felt it necessary to bury the thing that took his wife with her. Bury the past, out of sight, out of mind. Or so he thought.
He laid the single rose they bought down next to the rusting chains and couldn’t help but notice the stark difference. The rose stood out amongst all the dead things.
“Why are they locked together?” She asked.
“It’s so you can’t escape”.
Woah
The description, the contrast
The rosy cheeks shining in the gloomy atmosphere?
GENIUS
Seriously, this is some of the most lyrical prose I have read
Wow
Big wow
But that last line
“It’s so you can’t escape”
Holy CRAP
Shivers and snakes down my spine Yuvii
Shivers AND snakes
A beautifully brief piece that made me curious about both the story and your other works
Your vocal pattern really felt like smooth jazz on my brain
Like a glass of cold choice beverage (almond juice)
Wonderful, you simply must keep writing Yuvii, if only for my selfish love of your work
Thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback ❤️❤️