STORY STARTER
The main characters are stuck in a labyrinth; it has no exit, but they do not know that.
Write their story; how can such a story end?
STORY STARTER
The main characters are stuck in a labyrinth; it has no exit, but they do not know that.
Write their story; how can such a story end?
Lovely! I love the conversation between you and Ryden. I always love humor! Though I’d like to make one suggestion. Maybe go into a little more detail.
Example: like how did they get in there in the first place? Also, how are they surviving? Do they have food and water? Is it like a different planet or are they super humans? Or do they have food? I think making you Where there was slightly more drama, you know what I’m saying? Like, they are being chased by a beast, or there food is about to run out and they are trying to figure that out.
I think it would help keep the reader more intrigued and closer with the story/ characters.
Just a few suggestions. But the story is great!
I very much enjoyed it. Have a blessed day!