WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of being caught in a thunderstorm without using the words:
Above
Cold
Fall/fell
Down
Focus on all aspects of the situation – the physical sensations, the appearance of the sky and landscape, and potentially the mood of the narrator as part of this.
Zeus’s Gift, Why Hide
Zeus’s reign
His livelyhood
Our destruction
He lives above the clouds
Throwing his bolt down below
The cold rain feels like glass as it pours
To run from it is to shield yourself from the beauty in front of you
If you run, you are to fall
You cannot escape the rain
Zeus’s reign
His livelyhood
Your destruction
My beauty
You wish to float the above clouds with Zeus
No
You can’t appreciate his gift
You run
You hide
We embrace
What are you scared of?
You aren’t cold from the rain
You were cold to begin with
Zeus’s gift
You turn and wish he gave you gold
Not rain
Be appreciative
Learn
You will warm in time
What are you scared of?
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