WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a description of being caught in a thunderstorm without using the words:

Above

Cold

Fall/fell

Down

Focus on all aspects of the situation – the physical sensations, the appearance of the sky and landscape, and potentially the mood of the narrator as part of this.

Zeus’s Gift, Why Hide

Zeus’s reign

His livelyhood

Our destruction

He lives above the clouds

Throwing his bolt down below


The cold rain feels like glass as it pours

To run from it is to shield yourself from the beauty in front of you

If you run, you are to fall

You cannot escape the rain


Zeus’s reign

His livelyhood

Your destruction

My beauty


You wish to float the above clouds with Zeus

No

You can’t appreciate his gift

You run

You hide

We embrace

What are you scared of?


You aren’t cold from the rain

You were cold to begin with

Zeus’s gift

You turn and wish he gave you gold

Not rain

Be appreciative

Learn

You will warm in time

What are you scared of?

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