WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a descriptive passage about the sound of water trickling down a stream as you walk through a shaded woodland.
Consider the type of language that could best describe the sounds and ambience of this setting.
Flow
And the river runs slowly as the seasons turn
As I sit quietly racked with concern
The summer has past
Hard lessons learned
A pile of rocks built into carnes
A river wild no pretense or scorn
Pause and listen I lie listless
The water flows on without resistance
With slow understanding the river remains
Passing the mountains the rocks and the plains
And finally the ocean as the ripples wane
Cycle completed no banks to constrain
And with the flow I’ve changed inner narrative
this shift I came to pass a personal imperative
I’ve turned a corner I’ve emerged as a crone
This aging of vessel I no longer bemoan