COMPETITION PROMPT
Write a poem in ‘revorto’ form.
A reverto poem uses couplets that alternate between one highly poetic and one very unpoetic line. The form is meant to jar the reader from a sense of poetic beauty to something other.
Black Friday
When the clock strikes midnight, the gates fling open wide
I cling to my wallet and leave behind my pride
We crash forward like waves on rocks at the dawn’s first light
My phone dies while trying to scroll through the sale site
Blinded by the brilliant lights, I begin to chart my course
I bump into someone and coffee goes down my shirt
The air is charged with cries and laughter, as the thrill ignites
For the year’s best deals, I’ll put up a good fight
Thoughts of giving dissipate as we bargain our souls
Yet another heavy cart is rolled over my toes
We weave around rummaging for treasures in an intricate dance
Just throw it all in the cart or you’ll lose your chance
Perhaps amongst all the chaos, we can recall our shared humanity-
Wait, did that guy just take the last TV? The audacity.
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