VISUAL PROMPT

by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans

Write a story titled "When I Look in the Mirror".

When I Look in the Mirror

“Mirrors have always lied to me.”


I don’t mean in the way they stretch light, warp shadows, or flip words backwards. I mean they’ve never shown me the truth.

Do you ever look too long and feel something looking back? Something that isn’t quite you?


I do.


I always have.


When i was little, i thought it was a trick of the light. The way my reflection would linger half a second too long, the way the eyes in the glass seemed brighter, like they knew something I didn’t. My mother told me i had an overactive imagination. My therapist called it dissociation. My friends just laughed it off.


But they don’t see what i see.

Because when i look in the mirror, i see something else entirely.


And lately… its been getting worse.


It started with small things-little inconsistencies that most people would brush off. A blink I didn’t remember making. A tilt of the head that felt unfamiliar. A shadow passing behind me when no one else was home.


Then came the smiling.


I don’t smile much. Not in the way she does. My reflection, i mean.


I’ll be standing in front of the bathroom mirror, brushing my hair or washing my hands, and for a moment , everything s normal. But then ill glance up and there it is. That wide, sharp grin stretching across my face. Except… I didn’t smile.


I never do.


I started covering my mirrors after that. Every single one. Sheets, towels, whatever i could find. It didn’t stop the dreams, though.


Or the voice.


“I know why you’re afraid of me, Evelyn.”


It speaks to me now. Low and sweet, like a song hummed just beneath the surface of my mind. I try to ignore it. I tell myself it’s all in my head.


But deep down, i know the truth.


The thing in the mirror, she isn’t me.


Not yet.






I wake up in the middle of the night heart pounding the air thick with something wrong. The room is dark but i swear i feel eyes on me pressing in like a weight against my chest. My breath is uneven as i reach for my phone, squinting at the time. 3:12 AM.


That’s when I hear it.


A soft creak. A shift in the silence.


I freeze, my fingers tightening around the blanket. The mirrors are covered. I made sure of that before bed. But still… something feels off.


Slowly, i sit up. The darkness is heavy, stretching into the corners of the room, and i scan the space, searching for whatever has me feeling uneasy.


Then I see it.


The vanity mirror by my closet. The one i covered days ago.


The sheet is on the floor.


My throat goes dry. I don’t remember taking it down. I know I didn’t.


But the mirror is bare, gleaming in the dim glow of my phone screen. And my reflection she’s standing there, wide-eyed, lips curling into that too-sharp grin.


Only… I haven’t moved.


I want to run. To look away. To pretend this isn’t happening. But I can’t. I’m rooted in place, my breath coming in quick, shallow bursts.


Then slowly, she tilts her head. Just a fraction to the left.


And so does mine.


I don’t remember doing it. I don’t feel myself doing it. But there it is. A perfect echo. A second too late.


My stomach tightens, nausea twisting in my gut. My fingers twitch aching to reach for my phone to turn on the light to do something. But I don’t move.


I can’t.


Then without warning, my reflection lifts a hand.


And my fingers move with it


But I didn’t tell them to.


A slow, crawling sensation spreads through my limbs, like invisible strings pulling me forward. The glass hums just barley, like a sound beneath sound, pressing into my skull.


My lips part.


I don’t hear the words.


I feel them.


Curling from my throat like they don’t belong to me.


“Let me out.”

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