POEM STARTER
'Memory breathes'
Write a poem that begins with this line.
POEM STARTER
'Memory breathes'
Write a poem that begins with this line.
This is Beautiful! It reminds me of Emily Dickinson!
I love the word usage in this poem! Really makes the voice stand out, and it gets the reader an idea of what this narrator/character is like.
The originality and creativity is also pretty good, and I like how you personified memory and how its actions impact the narrator. I feel like you could do even more with this concept, like in the last few sentences, those could have been expanded even more.
Pacing is also very good in this poem. It doesn’t lag, and apart from maybe the last few sentences, it doesn’t go on for too long.
This is really good! Followed, and keep writing :)