Aspire to Inspire

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Aspire to Inspire

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Time’s Up

Aspire to Inspire

1 min read

Trembling, his breaths coming out as short, ragged gasps, Vai remained under the bed. His heart was pounding against his rib cage, like a wronged prisoner demanding freedom. The footsteps were growing louder, the ear-peircing screech of a sword being dragged across the floor echoing in his ears. Vai held his breath. A bead of sweat dripped down his forehead, along with a small crimson dot of blood...

Action

Unrequited

Aspire to Inspire

1 min read

“Hey, Silas?” I mutter, fidgeting with my hands, looking at the ground.

Looking at me with those beautiful eyes, he speaks, “mhm?”

I hesitate, my head winding and weaving, trying to come up with a way to say this without sounding like a complete creep, “I’ve got something to tell you.”

“Fire away.”

I look at his expectant expression… his blonde hair, tanned skin, freckles. My heart was fluttering...

Drama

Romance

The Feeling Was Mutual

Aspire to Inspire

2 min read

I sat at the dock, dangling my legs into the water, gazing into the distance. I could practically feel the blood on my feet, it was so much thicker than the murky water that rippled below me. And it was darker, oh so much darker. The crimson hue was like a fleeting cloud of red smoke, staining my skin and filling the air with a lingering sent of blood. I hated him, sure, but not enough for him to ...

Romance

Drama