Daciana Ambrose
New to writing and trying to improve. A follow and feedback to my writing really helps, thank you. :)
Daciana Ambrose
New to writing and trying to improve. A follow and feedback to my writing really helps, thank you. :)
New to writing and trying to improve. A follow and feedback to my writing really helps, thank you. :)
New to writing and trying to improve. A follow and feedback to my writing really helps, thank you. :)
I storm into his room, teary eyed. I was right, he was with another girl and has been cheating on me for the past two months. My boyfriend, or should I say ex-boyfriend Lucas cheated on me with one of my old friends from college.
“Get out Lia, now!” I scream at her making her flinch a little. She grabs her shirt and runs out leaving. After I was sure she was gone I let the tears run down my chee...
“Put this away please it shouldn’t be on the couch Darcy” Felix whines. Darcy grabs her bag and book from the couch and starts to walk away.
“Actually wait let me see your room it’s probably a mess.” He says while following Darcy to her room. “Felix come on it’s my room I’ll deal with it you go away.”
Ignoring her Felix walks into her room and let’s out a big huff. “God why did you give me a me...
Before you read lmk in the comments a better title because I suck at making them. Please be brutally honest about my writing so I can fix my flaws. :)
“I have to” she says pushing me to the ground. “Says who? Let me help you” I reply while getting up. “You don’t understand there’s no way anyone can help me ok!” She cried. Suddenly a sharp pain hit my stomach.
I looked down in horror. She stabbed...