A Frosty Betrayal

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“I have to” she says pushing me to the ground. “Says who? Let me help you” I reply while getting up. “You don’t understand there’s no way anyone can help me ok!” She cried. Suddenly a sharp pain hit my stomach.


I looked down in horror. She stabbed me.


I look back up at her, tears streaming down my cheeks. “Please don’t do this” I pleaded.


I gasp as she twisted the blade inside me and yanked it out.


Losing my balance I fell to the ground. My vision was blurry and was being consumed by darkness.


She leaned down with a smirk, reaching her bloody hand out to my face. I screamed in agony and pain. My body went frozen numb.


She froze me enough to keep me in pain but not enough to die. Not yet at least. It’s felt as if ice was seeping through my veins. I screamed, cried, begged and pleaded for it to stop while she sat there. Smiling at me.


She tilted her head, “Blood looks good on you, it brings out your eyes you should bleed more often.”


Satisfaction flooded her face as she laughed maniacally. I could just barely see her walking away. My best friend who I trusted with my life and never thought would be the one to take my life. Walking away as I died. Along with a trail of dark frost following her every step.


I closed my eyes and smiled letting the frost take over me. Knowing I would wake up exactly like her.

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