Writing Prompt
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WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story focusing solely on items made of gold.
Consider the kind of language you will use to place the focus on these objects and portray a particular atmosphere associated with them, whilst tying them into a plot.
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Solid gold Bright and bold The highlight of my day In every single way A master of connection Sure fire bet for any election Life of the party The laughter hearty Compassion sincere Uprooting all fear No regards for regret No cause for you to fret In hers my soul confides In hers my peace resides
Somewhere in the house, Bree slammed a door. Paul, Jr. was pacing in the dining room. Marybeth and Momma were doing something in the kitchen. Hands in her laps, head down, Aunt Dorie sat in Dadâs old recliner. She looked up and then back down flipping the gold coin in her fingers.
It was heavy, satisfyingly heavy. Marveling Aunt Dorie tossed the coin in her hand. The edge ridges were pristine. The light sparkled as the coin, her coin, twirled in the air. With her thumb and index finger she explored the golden figure on the coin face. A beautiful woman in gorgeous flowing robes stared back at her. Just like the salesman said holding a coin is holding a masterpiece in miniature. Aunt Dorie listened. Paul, Jr was walking down the hallway probably to argue with Bree. Junior loved to argue just like Paulie. Is only he would listen, Aunt Dorie thought.
Daddy left Mommaâs care to her. She had cared for them both for years. The appointments, errands, the urinals, Aunt Dorie had done the caretaking while Paulie was busy with his family, his career. Aunt Dorie always takes care of everything. She had the right to invest her parentsâ savings and Jeff was so kind. The golden woman held a sword aloft. Victory or vengeance, Aunt Doris thought as she ran her fingertips over the lustrous heroine.
Momma and Marybeth came into the living room carrying coffee and cookies. Mommaâs hands shook and Aunt Dorie reached to help. With hard eyes, Marybeth glared at Aunt Dorie and steadied the cookie plate. The coin tumbled from Aunt Dorieâs lap. ďżźRolling over the area rug, the coin rolled and landed by Breeâs feet. They stood in a semi circle around Aunt Dorie.
Grimacing Bree handed the coin to Paul, Jr. Aunt Dorie fought the urge to grab it. Everyone was looking at her. Her heart began to beat quicker. She thought about her research on gold and silver investing and her many phone calls with nice Jeff. Her investment was safe in a vault in Carson City, Jeff had promised. Thereâs plenty more where that came from. Aunt Dorie crossed her arms and thought of her shiny coins.
She was gold.
All of his life Prem had been surrounded by the cold tones of silver. His family crest, a cool grey star to match the namesake of his father, the Silverstar. Their house had been decorated with delicate white curtains intertwined with sparkling silver threads. All of the rings on his hand, gifts from each of his birthdays since he was five, were silver. Even the plates they ate on were the cold, stoic metal.
But Aida was gold. As warm as the golden rays of sunlight that beamed through the parted morning clouds and bathed the forest in lively hues of yellow.
When they had been to the sand shores of the lake for the first time, as close as the two had ever come to seeing the ocean, her face had lit up with excitement. The sand was not white as the beaches of Olympia were said to be but rather they were golden sands.
The warm hues seemed to reflect from her smiling face as she watched the gentle lapping waters of the lake while he watched her.
Sheâs gold like the honey she stirs in her tea. He canât stand the stuffâthe honey or the tea. The golden, sugary substance thick like ichor is far too sweet and the tea is far too spiced. But the smell reminds him of her.
On cold mornings sitting across from her, heâs watch and listen to the clink of her spoon against the mug. And he could smell the strong spiced scent of clove and cinnamon and cardamom. The aroma is strong but nearly as jarring as the taste he samples from her cup.
It suits her, he thinksâcomparing her to gold or to sunlight or spiced tea. Things he had lived so long without it seems, that he was lackingâgold like warmth. He needs her. He needs her warmth.
If you need to know the time then a watch is a perfect companion. If what you need, however, is more time then youâll be quite understanding of Kelly Hours current dilemma. Kelly is a businesswoman, well, aspiring one. As of now, sheâs got the credentials but none of the experience. The only magazine she could pose for is one titled Simply There. Every workday, she finds herself wishing to be noticed but every meeting someone always gets the best of her.
Today, itâs Adam Taylor, a constant pain in her side. The higher upâs have nicknamed him Midas because every business proposal heâs touched so far has become the golden standard. Heâs brought in so much revenue that Kellyâs shocked they haven't created a statue of him. With how pompous he was, she expected heâd request multiple. Kelly couldnât stand Adam. Whenever she stared at him hoping heâd combust heâd send an agonizing playful wink her way. And then there was his aggravating nasal laugh that she swore she could hear everywhere. Adam always had something to laugh about.
Trying to grab a cup of tea at the water machine? Cue Adamâs laughter as he approaches you to talk about the premium coffee he drinks at home. Did your favorite golden bracelet get stuck in your hair? Cue Adamâs laughter as he embarrassingly helps you free your hand. It was awful! His laugh had become a permanent fixture in her head and even haunted her dreams. Yes, Adam Taylor was someone Kelly Hours needed time away from. He wasnât her only rival for attention but he was the most irritating.
Then the worse thing happened. She and Adam were called into their bossâs office, Mr. Worth. Once inside, she stared at the golden bowl full of golden apples on his desk, trying so hard not to stare at his barely on wig piece.
âIâve got a project for you two,â he said followed by the sound of shuffling papers.
Kelly hears Adam move forward and she looks up, seeing her boss had his hands out with a stack of papers in each. Adam grabs the left stack and she the right.
âWill we be working together?â Adam asked.
Kelly glanced at him, spotting and hating the look of scrutiny on his face. She didnât want to work with him either but at least her reasoning had nothing to do with his work capability. Everyone thought she didnât have the ferocity and means to work the corporate ladder because of her outward meek-like appearance. Their judgments most likely based on how she wore golden-trimmed glasses. Sure, there was also her tendency to end up on coffee duty for everyone in the office but it was definitely the glasses they were judging. But there she was standing in Mr. Worthâs office which would show everyone that someone saw all the potential locked up inside her.
âNot exactly.â Mr. Worth said much to their relief. âYou see, the company we worked with wanted us to have a female perspective andââ
âWait, are you giving me this project because Iâm the only woman here?â
âWhat? No!â Mr. Worth said in a high-pitch tone. âLetâs not start saying things that will make HR come around.â
He maintained himself, continuing. âLook, Iâm tasking you with this because I believe in you.â
âAnd Iâm the only woman here.â
âI believe in you,â Mr. Worth repeated. âI was thinking you both can create separate ideas then we compare each to see whose is better.â
It was obvious to Kelly that no matter what idea she came up with Mr. Worth was set on Adamâs. If she could predict his plan, which is obvious, her name will be attached as proof they listened to their clientâs request.
âIâll get right on it, Mr. Worth,â Adam said, readying to leave the room.
âWait, just so you know the deadlineâs tomorrow so you both be quick about this.â
Kellyâs eyes widen at the deadline. There was no way she could come up with something by tomorrow! She expects Adam to protest the deadline first but instead, he gives a charming smile.
âOf course!â Adam enthuses as he left.
Ugh. Now, she couldnât protest the deadline at all. If she did then sheâll look incompetent in comparison. So Kelly left the room without a proper goodbye and went on her lunch break. She thought sheâd come up with something by now but her lunch break is almost over. Sitting on a bench, she gazes at the golden fountain in the park. Her phone alarm goes off and itâs time to to head back. She gets up and throws her food away. Then heads over to the golden fountain on a whim.
Kelly didnât believe in magical circumstances. It was hard work that made anything achievable. But still, she reaches into her pocket for a coin and makes a wish. Nothing happened of course. No idea popped into her head instead she is left disappointed. As she makes her way back, she stuffs her hands in her pockets and feels something odd in one. She clutches the odd finding and takes it out of her pocket. Itâs a golden pocket watch but the time wasnât right. And now that she looked closer neither was the face of the watch. Instead of numbers or numerals, there are strange symbols all golden in color. Even the hands of the watch are gold. Out of curiosity, she moves the hour hand of the watch back and finds herself back in Mr. Worthâs office.
This time the watch in her hand looks like a normal golden pocket watch. She looks around both Mr. Worth and Adam are staring at her.
âAm I wasting your time Ms. Hours?â Mr. Worth asks with clear annoyance.
She pockets the pocket watch, a shameful look on her face.
âNo, definitely not.â She says, her mind reeling for answers but only left with a cloud of confusion.
I cried when he was born. I held my wifeâs hand as she became a mother. Moaning, then whimpers, and with a final last gasping scream she brought him into the world. Her cheeks were streaked with tears. Breathing, gasping, laughing, then with a final burst it was done. The hours of pain were done. She cried with the relief of it. I bent down, touched my forehead to hers. She smelled of sweat and stale breath and of a sweetness like vanilla ice cream. We cried so we didnât hear how quiet the room had become. The doctor and nurses hadnât moved, hadnât spoken. There was supposed to be the sound of crying. There were supposed to be things happening. Instead there was a hollowed out silence and I watched his motherâs face twist into fear. âWhatâs wrong?â No one replied. No one moved. âI canât,â the doctor stuttered, âI canât move. Help me.â That was when I first saw my son. Shimmering gold. A wriggling statue still attached by the umbilical cord to his mother. Beneath him, the doctorâs hand was pinned to the table, crushed. With the help of two nurses, I lifted my son off the doctorâs hand. I found out later he weighed 120kilos. 120 kilos of shimmering wiggling solid gold.
Things got crazy after that. Doctors rushing in and out. Half of them just wanted to gape at him, at us. They didnât know what tests to run. There are no tests for babies made of solid gold. No way to understand how it was possible because of course it isnât. Newspapers announced it was âA Miracle!â: âGolden Boy Confounds Scientists!â âRich Beyond Their Dreams!â âFamily Blessed With Riches!â
Except we werenât blessed. Everywhere we went, they pointed and stared. His mother was whisked away for test after test after test. They tried to take blood tests, but he has no blood. They bent dozens of needles finding that out. My son screamed in terror as they jabbed and poked and stared at him. Eventually, they let us all go home.
We named him Aurum.
We became rich after his first haircut. I brought the threads of pure gold to a jeweller who spun them into the most beautiful and delicate necklaces you could imagine. That paid for our medical bills, and for a new house.
We had to move quite soon in his childhood. As he grew, the weight became too much for our furniture, then the floors began to creak painfully with his every step. One afternoon, he woke especially happy and crawled into our bedroom and into our bed. He just wanted to wake us up, I suppose. Just a child being silly. He stood at the end of the bed and jumped. The frame collapsed and he fell sideways, landing on his motherâs leg. Snapped it in two places. Iâll always remember him curled in a ball in the corner of the bedroom screaming as the ambulance attendants took his mother off to the hospital.
He never got in our bed again.
Soon we realized we werenât safe. There were people who cared more about how much he was worth than about whether he was alive. The first time, they tried to pound in our front door. I just had an old tennis racket. The police arrived before they got in, but Iâd been ready. I remember Aurum begging me to hide, to run. I wasnât going to let anyone take my son. I knew what I was supposed to do.
Aurum stopped going to school around that time. Parents had been telling their kids to bring some of his hair home, and heâd started getting bald patches. One kid tried to bite off his ear in gym class.
We had money to move away, somewhere remote and anonymous. Aurum didnât go outside much. He loves watching TV. Heâs never been able to trust many people, so the sitcom friendships probably seemed strange and wonderful.
We lived together, the three of us, alone and separate.
When his mother got sick, Aurum shaved his head for the treatments. Cut his toenails and fingernails. When it got bad, I caught him about to cut off his little toe with an axe. Some sacrifices donât matter though. Eventually, everyone leaves.
Aurum left last night. He left me a letter. He told me he loved me and didnât want me to be alone. He told me that if he went away, I wouldnât need to hide any longer. He didnât know what would happen where he was going, but he would be safe.
Every night I fall asleep wondering where he went. Sometimes I imagine him at the bottom of the ocean, surrounded by beautiful fish and coral, gold shimmering amongst blues and greens, free and at peace. Sometimes, I imagine him laying deep and heavy in a beautiful lake, looking up at the boats and swimmers floating past.
I imagine him at peace. And I cry.
Donât feel bad about guilt weary one, Sigh only when you need time. Our thoughts do leave us alone And do our mind a crime.
Do not overthink little one, Air your fears like rain. Our cares are more than fun And our loves not a bane.
Do not feel fear oh princess, You stand taller then their cries. Your tears will come less and less, Reaching high into the skies
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I know this is not the prompt lol but itâs from the heart.
In the morning, she sees the golden sun rising outside her window. âWhat a beautiful start to my day?â she thinks.
Before school, she dresses in a shiny gold dress and strappy gold heels. She smiles at her reflection in the mirror. âI look good in gold,â she thinks.
At school, she admires the gold star at the top of her English paper. âI deserve this,â she thinks.
After school, the team goes out to eat. She buys fries and sits down with her friends. She throws out the burnt black fries and the undercooked yellow fries. She smiles at the fries that are left. âOnly golden fries for me,â she thinks.
Before the game, she uses a gold scrunchy to put her hair into a high pony. She wears a gold jersey. âGold is the color of winners,â she thinks.
After the game, she receives a gold medal. She meets up with a boy with gold hair. He gives her a gold bracelet. âOnly the best for me,â she thinks.
Before bed, she uses a gold glitter gel pen to write in her journal. She smiles. âI wish tomorrow will be another happy day,â she writes, âa day filled with golden moments.â
The next morning, she sees only black outside her window. âWhere is my golden sun?â she thinks.
She looks for news on her phone. She sees the headline: âSun has turned to gold. Black skies. The end has come.â
âI refuse to believe that my golden sun is gone,â she thinks.
She turns on the overhead light. âIâll just pretend itâs my golden sun shining through my window,â she thinks.
Before school, she grabs her gold dress out of her closet. Or she tries to. âItâs stuck,â she thinks.
She loses her balance and strikes her eye against her solid gold dress. She sees red. âMy gold dress has turned into real gold,â she thinks, âjust like the sun. But I canât wear a solid gold dress. What am I supposed to do?â
She sees only red clothes in her closet. âI refuse to wear red,â she thinks.
She wears her pajamas to school and goes bare foot.
At school, she sees empty blue hallways. She crosses her arms and stares out at nothing.
She goes to her classroom and sits at a desk. She is the only person in the school. âI wonât get a gold star today,â she thinks. âThere is no one here to give it to me.â
She stares at her blue desk. âI refuse to miss my gold star,â she thinks.
She goes to the front of the class, to the teacherâs desk. She pulls out a heavy gold star. âItâs real gold now too,â she thinks.
After school, she goes out to eat by herself. She sees a packed and messy green restaurant. She sees people shoving food into their mouths. She feels sick to her stomach.
âEat whatever you want,â says a man with a saucy green beard. âNo one is working because the world is ending. Just donât eat the fries. The black burnt ones and the yellow undercooked ones are good. But the perfectly cooked ones have turned to solid gold now.â
âI refuse to eat black or yellow fries,â she says, âand fries are the only food Iâll eat.â
She leaves the restaurant.
She goes to the house of the boy with the golden hair. She rings the doorbell.
The boyâs dad answers the door with a gray face.
She knows what the boyâs dad will say before he says it.
âHe canât see you,â he says. âHe turned solid gold, just like the sun.â
She goes home to find her gold glitter gel pen. She knows, before she even sees it, that it will be solid gold, that it wonât write anymore.
She walks into her room. She sees her yellow glitter gel pen. She picks it up and stares at it in awe. âI thought it would be solid gold,â she says, âbut itâs not even gold colored anymore.â
The pen opens itâs eyes and looks at her.
She drops it and jumps back.
âWhat color am I?â it asks. âWill you write with me? Will you write with a yellow pen?â
âNo,â she says. âI refuse to write in yellow. I refuse to have any moments that arenât golden.â
âThen what will you do,â asks the pen.
âI just wonât write in my journal today at all,â she says. âIâll go to sleep. Tomorrow will be filled with only golden moments.â
âIf you go to sleep,â the pen says, âwithout writing in your journal, then tomorrow wonât happen at all. If you wonât write in yellow now, then you will never write in gold again.â
âI donât understand,â she says.
âYou have to accept all of your moments not just the golden ones or you canât have any moments at all,â the pen says. âTo have the golden moments, you need to accept the black moments, the red moments, the blue moments, the green moments, the gray moments, and the yellow moments. You need to write in yellow now or you can never write in gold again.â
She thinks about this. She doesnât understand it at all.
âBut,â she thinks, âif accepting this yellow moment means that I can have more golden moments, then I think I can do it.â
She takes the pen. She opens her journal. She writes in yellow.
She keeps writing and the color of ink changes as she writes. She writes in black about the end of the world. She writes in red about her abysmal wardrobe. She writes in blue about being alone at school. She writes in green about the messy restaurant. She writes in gray about the golden-haired boy turned to solid gold. She writes in yellow, âI wish tomorrow will be another day filled with many colors.â
Pressure. Darkness. Solid. We found it in the mines of Calumn. Glittering like the sun once removed from the rock and brought to the light. But never enough. Cold. Wet. Jostled. We found it in the rivers of Qatarâd. Glistening like the stars among the pebbles. But never enough. Aseptic. Beautiful. Still. She lays out of the path of time. Waiting like Oppy on Mars, for enough sunlight to come. G01D is the only cure. But there is never enough.
So she sleeps, in the cryogenic cold, for the world to find all the gold.
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