Writing Prompt
WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story that includes an example of a braided narrative.
This structure uses multiple interwoven storylines, creating a complex and layered narrative. This can be most easily achieved with different character perspectives or different timelines.
Writings
Midnight Reunion
The big hand on the clock reached twelve and, the door slammed open, casting a crimson light that felt like an entrance to some other world. I blinked my eyes open and shakily reached for my beer.
“That’s enough for you, ain’t it, Tori?”
I whipped my head around to see Adam staring at me, his piercing blue eyes reflecting a mix of curiosity and concern. “Tori?”
A toothpick dangled from the c...
The Pinot
“Would you like a glass of the Pinot?” Deena asked.
The attractive older couple continued talking. The server nodded and swerved back into the cocktail party.
“I’m ready to leave whenever you are Petra.”
“We just got here. We have to do a couple of circuits to pretend we care or I’ll never snag Wanda as a new board member. “
“ All right two laps then Murphy fade. “
Petra and Goodman linked...
You And Me Pt3
En fin de compte
3 years after pt1
Therapist: so this is our final session how does that make you feel?
Me: “like I can finally be free”
I can understand that *smiles*
“It’s taken this long to feel my worth”
Has your ex-wife tried to contact you?
“No she hasn’t”
You both went through a lot to have peace, I am glad that there is no bad blood.
“I bear no grudge”
Don’t repeat the cycle Pete...
“You’re Drunk,”
“Drink this. It’ll make you feel better,” Zaira said handing over a shot of what Silas thought he had been needing. But not before pouring in a bit of that special ingredient, only and pinch.
“Yes yes, you did your job you can leave now” Silas demanded still angered by the whole situation. A hand waved in the air shooing her away. His second mistake that day. Zaira would never enjoy being sho...
The scream
1
I go about my daily life as usual, going through the same routine. I eat breakfast, brush my hair and teeth, and start out the door for my morning walk. I yawn as I pass by the commercial district. Jerry, my neighbor, is about ten feet in front of me. I start to bring up my hand to wave, but he just walks on by. Rude, I think, I try not to let it get to me however, after all Jerry’s always been ...
Wall Around The Heart
The summer heat is unbearable, and the days are dragging by as Ariel sat at her desk and watched the sun finally set into the distance. Her mind reeling from nightmares of before when she was younger, and had been witness to a horrific crime , having her life threatened by the killer forced her into silence and forever changing the way this little girl will look at the world. She has spent years t...
Who Are You?
Mark was an average Joe. He was in his mid-thirties living in Jonesboro, Arkansas. He never really got out much. He generally felt lonesomeness clawing at him. He worked at a small movie store, his pay wasn’t astounding, but it was an appreciable amount. His apartment was located in the “not so nice” part of town, which isn’t saying much, considering the town he lived in is extremely underprivileg...
Another Rebel
You’re waiting in a classroom
For the lectures to begin
You’ve been there for thirteen hours
Pondering your sins
Tommy Lee he’s at the Big H
Scratching off a ticket
He ain’t been to school for weeks
He’s been busy with Bridget
Sammy’s driving doughnuts
In an old Manchester lot
The police they are after her
She’s minutes off from caught
And the holy dove sits in its cage
It’s waiting to be boug...
Sunday Scaries
Exactly like clockwork, it’s every single Sunday. I can almost anticipate it now because it’s every Sunday. Like clockwork. Exact.
Why do I feel this way? I feel it in my body. In my mind. My body is in flight mode. My mind is a Bugatti, never quite finding the finish line.
It’s a weekly existential crisis and I’m both the interviewer and interviewee. Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
The su...