Writing Prompt
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WRITING OBSTACLE
Your character has been struggling to understand an emotion. They finally ask their best friend about it, only to find out that they’ve been feeling it too.
Try to think of interesting ways you can describe the emotion, particularly as your character might not know the right word for it.
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Haisley didn’t know whether she was in love.
Countless Saturdays at the library consisted of the soft scratching of pencil on lined notebook paper, the clack-clack-clacking of keyboard keys, the slight turning of musty textbook pages, and—once the ever-daunting submit button had finally been pressed— late-night chats filled with wide-eyed hopes and hushed fears and silly jokes. It wasn’t long before they both fell into a sort of comfortable rhythm, between studying and talking and reading and laughing, and Haisley felt something stirring in her heart that she couldn’t quite place.
She’d never been in love before. In fact, she was nearly certain she was aromantic. And yet, she couldn’t stop thinking about Sage, and what a funny story they told today! Seeing their smile always lit up even the dullest moments, and every time they glanced her way, Haisley felt a warmth in her chest that seemed to float like a birthday balloon.
In theory, it was easy to imagine—being in love with Sage. Haisley envisioned being their girlfriend, them kissing her and calling her “theirs”. Holding their hand and going on dates, but never really thinking about what they’d actually do on them. There wasn’t time. Once conjured, these romantic pictures slipped away like sand through parted fingers, and Haisley knew deep down that they still felt wrong.
So what was this then? It was love—Haisley knew that much—but it wasn’t romantic and it didn’t feel like anything she’d felt toward family or other friends. She could talk to Sage, but how? How could she tell someone she loved them, but not in a normal, storybook way, and expect them to understand when even she didn’t?
She danced around the thought, tried to shove it back so she didn’t have to make sense of it, and still it persisted. Whispered in her ear every time Sage laughed at one of her jokes, sent her a witty text, or helped her with her homework. In her mind, still lingered twisted doubts: this must just be romantic, this must be made up. They made her head spin, kept her up at night overthinking every happy spark she felt at Sage’s glance.
One gloomy night, during their weekly study session, the rain tapped incessantly on the library roof, making chemistry even harder to focus on. The scientific words on her page blurred, and Haisley closed the book, focusing on Sage instead, their loose brown curls framing their face. They really did mean everything to her, didn’t they? __ Say the word, she thought. _Tell them. _But she didn’t know how. _Say the word. Say it. _But what if they didn’t understand? What if she said it, and Sage said, “Isn’t that friendship?” or “I have a boyfriend already,” even though Haisley didn’t really want to fit either role neatly?
Thunder cracked, and Sage jumped in their seat. They began to laugh, then frowned instead when Haisley went back to staring at her discolored chemistry book.
“You okay, Haisley? Something on your mind?” Sage was looking at her, eyes shining under the dim lamplight.
“Well, I’ve been thinking,” Haisley started, gripping her hands together as if she was praying to keep them from shaking. “Sage, I really love you. It’s not romantic, I don’t think; I know you’re not exactly looking for that right now.” She chuckled awkwardly. “It’s more like… a deep connection that’s hard to define, but it’s so real. I’m not even sure if I want anything to change; I just wanted you to know, I guess.”
Silence encompassed them, filled only by the whirring of the fan above them and the raindrops on the windowpane. As a small smile spread across their face, Haisley felt a rush of relief mixed with fear. Haisley read a million thoughts behind that smile, assumed a thousand emotions in those eyes, and for one terrifying moment, she was afraid Sage might just laugh at her.
And then they began to nod in agreement.
“I feel the same way,” they finally admitted, their voice barely above a whisper. “I was actually going to ask you to be my zucchini.” Haisley raised her eyebrows, heart still pounding like a wild drum.
“Your what?”
“Zucchini.” Sage grinned. “I know it’s kind of a funny name; it means queerplatonic partner. Like, a close relationship that’s not quite romantic, not quite a typical friendship, but something else.”
Haisley’s heart soared. Not only did Sage feel the same way as she did, but she had the word to describe it: queerplatonic. A non-romantic way of loving that didn’t fit into any traditional boxes. A relationship that was whatever she and Sage made of it. Committed to each other, not as friends or typical partners but as true companions, and Haisley couldn’t wait to discover what that might look like.
That night, she and Sage walked home together, arms linked, huddled under a yellow umbrella, the world around them fading to a gentle, moonlit blur.
Lucas stared blankly at his laptop screen, the blinking cursor on his essay mocking him with each silent pulse. He had been trying to write for hours, but the words wouldn't come. His mind was a foggy maze of half-formed thoughts, and every time he thought he found a way out, he hit another dead end. The anxiety sat in his chest like a rock, heavy and immovable.
Unable to bear the silence any longer, Lucas grabbed his phone and typed a quick message to his best friend, Sophie.
Lucas: “Hey, do you have a minute to talk? I’m feeling really overwhelmed right now.”
He stared at the screen, waiting for the three little dots that would tell him she was typing. Nothing. Minutes passed, and his heart sank further. Just as he was about to give up and put his phone down, it buzzed with a reply.
Sophie: “I’m really sorry, Lucas. I feel the same way. Everything feels like too much right now.”
Lucas frowned, his fingers hovering over the screen. He hadn’t expected that. Sophie was always the strong one, the one who could handle anything life threw at her. If she was feeling overwhelmed too, then things must be bad.
Lucas: “Do you want to talk about it?”
This time, her reply was quick.
Sophie: “I don’t know… I’ve been feeling so lost and anxious lately. Like I’m stuck and can’t see a way out. I don’t know how to help myself, let alone anyone else.”
Lucas took a deep breath, reading her words again and again. It was strange, but knowing that Sophie felt the same way he did made his own burden feel a little lighter. Maybe they were both stuck in the same foggy maze, but at least they weren’t alone.
Lucas: “I get it. I’ve been feeling like that too. It’s like I can’t move forward, no matter how hard I try. But maybe… maybe we don’t have to figure it out alone. Maybe we can just talk about it, even if we don’t know the answers.”
There was a long pause before Sophie replied.
Sophie: “Yeah… Maybe you’re right. We don’t have to have everything figured out, do we?”
Lucas: “No, I don’t think so. Let’s just be here for each other. That’s enough for now.”
Another pause, but this time it felt different. Softer, lighter, as if the weight in his chest had eased just a little bit.
Sophie: “Thanks, Lucas. I needed that.”
Lucas: “Me too, Sophie. Anytime.”
They continued to chat, sharing their worries, their fears, and the small victories they had managed to carve out in their days. As the minutes turned into hours, Lucas felt the fog in his mind begin to lift. He didn’t have all the answers, and neither did Sophie, but for the first time in a long time, that felt okay.
They might both be struggling, but at least they had each other. And for now, that was enough.
Why don’t I feel anything? What’s wrong with me? Why doesn’t it hurt?
I stare, unblinking. Someone nudges me. I give a blank smile.
Like a dead fish in a water bowl. Glassy eyed and without feeling.
What is this? This dull ache within. This small light shining At the end of the tunnel.
“Rylee?” I jump and run a hand through my hair.
“Yeah?” I wipe my face and smile sadly again.
“Are you okay?” Someone touches my shoulder.
“Yeah.” I smile again, this time tighter.
My hands shake as I reach for my untouched food and wrap it. It’s so cold in here, the TV buzzes in the corner of the restaurant with the news.
I exhale. “I’m okay.”
[ Part 2 of Unsent Messages, since this old prompt fits so well ]
"Hey, [ REDACTED ]!" They huff, pointing to their hair, "Mind explaining this?"
I bat my eyelashes innocently and hum, "Explain what?"
Their hair, which usually rests in a beautiful, fluffy, face-framing style is now messily tied up into several braids. The braids are sloppy and casual, lovingly held together by random, different colored hair ties.
"I, for one, think you look great," I chuckle, lips upturning at their annoyed huff. They're pretty cute when they're upset.
Wait, what?
"Yeah, right. For someone who loves my hair so much, you certainly don't do it justice," They grumble, crossing their arms and plopping onto the ground beside me.
Despite my protests, they tug out the braids, their hair falling down in loose ringlets. My breath catches - their hair, wavy and a little frazzled falls perfectly against their face. It looks wind-tousled, as if they had just returned from flying a kite at the beach. With the sun streaming in from the window behind them, they look almost...ethereal. Angelic, even.
What. Seriously, what are these thoughts?
I haven't been thinking straight after reading their unsent message (haha, title drop :D). That draft...
"You look really good," I blurt, cursing myself internally. "I-I mean, your hair looks really good. It's all wavy, and stuff. Yeah."
Their cheeks warm, and I notice that they look a little disappointed.
"You think so?" They ask, tugging at a curl. I nod, watching them fidget with their fingers. "Do you think I should start styling my hair like this more often, then? I could probably recreate it easily enough, without resorting to whatever those braids were."
I blink, before tilting my head to the side. "Why? I mean, it looks nice, but I thought you liked your current style."
They look at me - and I mean, really look at me - before muttering, "You're so dense sometimes, y'know? I asked because it seems like you like it. This hairstyle, I mean."
My breath hitches, and I can feel my ears start to burn. I hope they don't notice the sudden pop of color in my face. Their lips curve into a smile, and I can't help but notice just how much brighter everything seems.
"Wow, it got warm in here," I laugh, awkwardly shifting in place.
"Really? I didn't notice," They frown, before scooting closer. Then, they grab my hands - pull them close to their chest, and drop the hair bands into my open palm.
"Anyways," They mutter, "I know you can do better than whatever...that was. You should do my hair again."
"Of course, Your Majesty. Absolutely, Your Majesty. Whatever Your Highness desires," I tease, making them roll their eyes.
I listen to them hum quietly, eventually settling into a comfortable rhythm as I braid their hair. Left, right, middle, repeat.
. . .
"Hey, Ajax?" I asked, slipping my hand into theirs. "Have you ever been in love before?"
They looked at me breifly, before glancing away. "Yes," they replied, an unfamiliar look resting on their beautiful features.
"I guess that's not too suprising," I nodded, giving their hand a squeeze. "It's different for everyone, right? What does it feel like to you?"
They hesitated, slowing their pace for a moment. Then they leaned forward and I, startled at the sudden proximity, was unable to do anything but blank as they pecked me on the cheek.
"You--" I choked, cut off by a sudden jab to the side.
"That," They answered, "is what love feels like to me."
"Is it supposed to hurt so much?" I frowned, rubbing at my aching sides.
. . .
"...there!" I exclaim, tying off the final braid, "All finished!"
I step back to admire my handiwork, using my phone to take a few photos of their front, back, and sides.
I hand them my phone, and they admire the photos, nodding in approval. "Not bad." They agreed, lips twitching at my triumphant and self-satisfied smile. "These should give my hair that nice affect when I wake up tomorrow, too. Do you think Rozalyn will like it?"
My smile falters, "Right, we have school tomorrow. I forgot." I hadn't even thought of leaving until now, the idea suddenly so heavy on my chest that I notice it's suddenly difficilt to breathe. Weird.
Have I always felt so hesitant about leaving their side?
The more I think about it, the more uncomfortable I begin to feel. My heart speeds up, beating so quickly that my breath struggles to keep up with it. The blood rushes to my head, making me feel dizzy and unsteady on my feet.
"...are you good?" They ask me, brows furrowing in concern.
"I don't know," I reply, biting my lip. I'm reluctant to tell them about the sudden increase of butterflies and stabbing-pains in my sides. About the rose-tinted lenses that suddenly manifest when I look at them, or the aches my heart feels when I force myself to look away. Will they think I'm being ridiculous?
"What's wrong?" They demand, suddenly much closer. Their worried hazel eyes scan my face, searching for an answer I'm not sure they'll find.
"Well, I'm actually hoping you'll tell me," I sighed, wringing my hands together. If I keep how I'm feeling bottled up, it's bound to explode and burn everyone (myself included) as a result.
"What?" Their frown deepens, and they take a step backwards to tilt their head.
"Recently, I've been feeling really weird. I'm flustered all the time, and my heart starts beating uncontrollably. I can't stop thinking about it. It's hard to breathe, and my stomach's filled with butterflies that turn to ash when I'm alone."
Their eyes widen with an indiscernible emotion, "[Redacted], that sounds like--"
"And what's weirder?" I interrupt quickly, "Is that I only feel this way when I'm with you."
A few beats pass before they speak. "...Oh."
"Is that bad?"
Their face lights up with delight, "Not at all."
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Sarah delicately passes her hand on her back. She shudders as she feels the scars, all of them are now bleeding. She gets a wet cloth and whimpers as she cleans the injuries Anthony had inflicted on her. On his wife. Sarah had gotten used to it by now, she knew it was her fault, she knew that if she goes out with friends Anthony gets angry. ‘ But it’s for my own good ‘ , she thinks. This time was a bit different, though. He had hit her more than usual, harder than usual. A small tear runs down her cheek, it hurts. But she doesn’t care about the cuts, the scars, the blood. She loves Anthony, and Anthony loves her.
…
Right?
The rest of Havenbrook Elementary was outside at recess but Caroline had snuck back in to do what many teachers complimented her ability to do; ask good questions. Caroline didn’t mean to be sneaky, but she was so worried about what was going on that she quietly crept up to Mrs. Boyd’s desk without causing her to lift her gaze toward the open door.
“Excuse me, Mrs. Boyd” she just about whispered. Startled, the 30-something year old teacher looked up and smiled when she saw Caroline at the door. “Hey sweetie what’s going on? Why aren’t you at recess?” she asked politely.
Caroline inched a little closer to the desk and ignoring the latter question replied: “Does your tummy ever feel weird?” Mrs. Boyd replied casually, relieved that nothing crazy was happening, “Sure does honey, pretty often. Does it hurt or feel like you might need to go to the bathroom?” Her eyes furrowed after asking.
Caroline sweetly shook her head no, and gazed upon her pink tennis shoes. She said that she’d been outside and felt normal right up until she was visited by Brennan Sander, who’d given her a peck on the cheek. Now, only a few minutes later, she stood in the classroom and her stomach was still turning.
Once she’d explained, Mrs. Boyd let a smile bubble up to the surface, sat back in her chair, and said to Caroline, “did it feel like there were butterflies flying around in your tummy?”
The child’s eyes grew bigger than they ever had, and she quicky replied back with a “how did you know?!”, to which Mrs. Boyd explained, even she still felt that way sometimes.
((TW: Romance))
***Froggy 𝘞𝘩𝘺 𝘥𝘰 𝘐 𝘧𝘦𝘦𝘭 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘢𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘦𝘳? 𝘞𝘩𝘺 𝘥𝘰𝘦𝘴 𝘯𝘺 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘵 𝘣𝘦𝘢𝘵 𝘦𝘹𝘵𝘳𝘢 𝘧𝘢𝘴𝘵? 𝘛𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘧𝘦𝘦𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨, 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘵? 𝘐 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘴𝘩𝘦'𝘭𝘭... 𝘚𝘩𝘦'𝘭𝘭 𝘯𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘣𝘦 𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘦...
Froggy sighed and threw his pencil down. He’d been feeling extra low lately, ever since he saw Moth kissing Robin. There had been a sudden tear in their relationship, she had been more distant, less talkative around him, like she had disconnected herself from their friendship. He had decided to follow her home, only to discover that she had been secrelt dating Robin without him knowing.
Froggy couldn’t help but feel angry, even though Moth wasn’t even his girlfriend. They had been best friends since they were small, but he had always felt more. He cherished every day he spent with Moth, small talks at school, or watching a movie at his house curled up on the couch.
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘣𝘣𝘪𝘣𝘨 𝘥𝘳𝘶𝘮 𝘰𝘧 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘵 𝘧𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘮𝘺 𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘴 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘯𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘐 𝘥𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘮 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘢𝘺 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘴 𝘮𝘦 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬, 𝘖𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘴 𝘸𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘧𝘭𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘏𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘥, 𝘸𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘧𝘪𝘦𝘭𝘥𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘣𝘦𝘢𝘶𝘵𝘪𝘧𝘶𝘭 𝘧𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘖𝘶𝘳 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘯 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘳𝘴.
Froggy yawned and rubbed his eyes, maybe one day he would confess, but for now, it was time to rest.
*** Moth Moth groaned, the party last night was wild. Her head spun crazily and she felt sick. She shouldn’t have stayed up so late, but at least she didn’t…um, well, do…stuff like some of the kids. She felt empty last night, and instead of enjoying dancing and singing, she just missed him…
𝘞𝘩𝘺 𝘥𝘪𝘥 𝘐 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘭𝘦𝘵 𝘩𝘪𝘮 𝘨𝘰? 𝘕𝘰𝘸 𝘮𝘺 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘧𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘸𝘰𝘦, 𝘞𝘩𝘺 𝘥𝘪𝘥 𝘐 𝘭𝘦𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘵 𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘸 𝘮𝘺 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘮𝘰𝘯 𝘴𝘦𝘯𝘴𝘦? 𝘐𝘯 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦'𝘴 𝘵𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘣, 𝘐 𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘥𝘦𝘧𝘦𝘯𝘴𝘦, 𝘕𝘰𝘸 𝘴𝘦𝘦𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘐'𝘷𝘦 𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘵, 𝘖𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘭𝘦𝘧𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘱𝘰𝘯𝘥𝘦𝘳, 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘵𝘩 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘴𝘵?
Moth grabbed her phone and begin to text Robin; no reply. They got separated last night through all the craziness, and he remembered hearing B. saying that he went home with one of his friends…a female friend. Moth's stomach lurched and she felt sick, Robin was so tired last night he didn't know what he was doing, let’s hope he didn’t do anything…gross.
Moth slowly crawled out of bed and got dressed. Her usual, purple sweater and dark blue jeans. She yawned and stretched before opening the door and heading downstairs. She clumsly sat down and poured herself some cereal, and then looked over at the seat he always sat in. Moth leaned bacl in the chair and cried. She didn’t even realize that she cried for two hours, leaving her food untouched. Then she heard a buzz from her phone, and when she saw who it was from, her heart jumped. Froggy. The three little words made her cry again though, she felt so bad.
Froggy: I’m so sorry. ❤️
**** Both Moth wiped away her tears and headed for the door, she had to make things right. His home was only two houses away, so it wasn’t a long walk. She slowly trotted down the sidewalk and up to his front porch, and she weakly smiled at his bright green door. Oh, how Froggy loved the color green. “Hello there, Moth! What brings you here?” Said Froggy’s sister, Toadly. Moth slightly shrugged, “Froggy.” She then brushed past Toadly and into Froggy’s home.
She could hear music blaring from Tadpole’s room, and then could hear a voice coming from Froggy’s room. She opened the brown and green door to Froggy’s room, and saw Froggy crumpled on the bed. “F-Froggy?” She croaked, sitting down on his bed. Froggy wiped away tears from his glossy brown fur, and stared at Moth with his big, golden eyes.
“I’m so sorry, Froggy.” Moth cried, collapsing onto Froggy, making them both tumble over on the bed. Froggy held Moth close as she cried and pleaded for forgiveness. “I’ve just been feeling so empty!”Moth exclaimed, and Froggy felt the same. He didn’t say a word for a while until Moth was done venting, and then lifted her chin so she would look him directly in the eye. “I love you.” Is all he said. Moth could feel her face flush as she held onto him.
“I-I’m sorry for ever kissing Robin, I just let my feelings get the best of me. And I-I know you thought we were dating, but we weren’t, s-so…” Moth trailed off as Froggy kissed her sweetly. She melted into his embrace and wrapped her arms around him. After a few moments of enjoying each other’s presences, they broke apart. “T-that was…nice.” Moth said, blushing. Froggy just nodded and continued to hold her close.
Moth stayed the night with Froggy, and they became closer than ever, a relationship that wouldn’t be broken.
Sara didn’t know what loneliness was. She was curious about it. “I wonder what it feels like to be lonely? I’ve never really understood loneliness. It seems like I have everyone I need in my life. Laura is also always here for me.” She looked at her. Laura was doing her homework. They were together to do their homework. “Laura … can I ask you something?” Sara said. “Sure.” Laura said. “What is loneliness?” Sara asked her. “Loneliness? Well … it’s when you feel like there’s no one there for you. Loneliness is similar to feeling like you have nk one to turn to when you need someone.” “Oh … I see …” Sara said. She thought about it some more. “Now that I think about, I do feel lonely, especially nowadays.” Her head went down to face the floor. “I didn’t know … I only ever had Laura as a friend. I’m a very shy girl. Moreover, I don’t really feel like my family is giving me as much attention and care like they used to. I’m lonely aren’t I?”
The girl paced around the living room waiting for Paul to arrive. Paul was her person, the boy that saved her. The boy that repaired her. The front door opened and there he was.
Paul.
“Hey there, what’s going on?” He asked as he noticed her pacing.
She took a step closer to him and he touched her face. He spoke again, “Did you feel a different emotion?”
“I did. It feels warm and fuzzy. Everytime I feel it I get butterflies. Though sometimes it’s not butterflies but a hot flash,” She explained.
He gave a soft smile, “Yeah? What else?”
She started up again, “Well I feel this with you. A lot more recently too. My face gets flushed and I feel like I’m on top of the fluffiest of clouds. I feel pretty when I feel this, especially when I’m with you.”
Paul chuckled and caressed her smooth exterior. “I think I know what you mean,” he said and grinned. He removed his hand and wrapped it around her waist. “I’ve felt the same with you too,” he whispered as he pressed his forehead to hers.
He moved her hands to his back and tapped a button near her spine. The girl in his arms powered off.
A panel slid out from her side and he took the panel typing in a word, adding it to the growing list of emotions she has learned so far.
“Love,” he whispered, “She’s learned love, romantic love, I’m so proud of her progress.”
Paul then pushed the panel back in place before powering her back on again. This girl, this humanoid robot that he had repaired and saved, was learning emotions.
“Hello Paul,” the robot girl said, looking into his eyes as he took a step back. “How many emotions do I have now?” She asked.
“Triz you’re list is up to thirty-seven,” Paul replied. They both looked at each other and Triz stepped closer to him giving him an embrace.
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