Tall Man

Horror

Poetry

White bold skin with eyes so fogged, Staring right at me, I walked away, I looked behind me and there he was, A tall man with light pale skin, He holds a umbrella while walking close by, He took a turn down a different street , I hear a blood curdling scream,

Comments 2

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2 years ago

Very cool cliff hanger! Leaves the readers wanting to know what happens next!

Alex True

2 years ago

I love it! Though there is definitely room for more of the story. Maybe something like “he took a turn down a different street, his steps faded, but shortly followed by the sounds of a blood curdling scream.” I was stunned..scared. I couldn’t move. After a few moments of just standing there like a statue, I took a few steps back and started running.

Note: I know this was a poem and not a story but if you were to make it a story that would be cool :)

Aniyah

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