WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.

How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?

me vs her

that dress. its perfect.

why didn’t i think of that

the way it fits her body

would it look better on mine?

no, of course not

i don’t have hips like that,

a stomach that flat, any of it.

why does she have everything

i am nothing compared to that

if i was her i would not take that for granted

not like she does

why didn’t i get that stuff

i deserve it more, don’t i?

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