WRITING OBSTACLE
Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.
How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?
me vs her
that dress. its perfect.
why didn’t i think of that
the way it fits her body
would it look better on mine?
no, of course not
i don’t have hips like that,
a stomach that flat, any of it.
why does she have everything
i am nothing compared to that
if i was her i would not take that for granted
not like she does
why didn’t i get that stuff
i deserve it more, don’t i?
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