A lovely journey seeks to find,
All the mystery left behind.
Things unknown will open forth,
Bringing happy, joyful warmth.
Truly sought for, magic divine,
Twisting, working to perfect vine.
Tangled enchantment of closed case,
Flowered forth in purple vase.
I like the rhyming in this poem. Good work!♥︎♥︎♥︎
This is amazing! It left me in awe, like only the best writers can do. I’ve never read a poem more beautifully inspiring and wonderfully written! Would love to hear your feedback!
Wow! I love this! Poems are the best! Please read my most recent story! Trying to get the word out!✝️☺️
Love this!
Really great language yet again to build the atmosphere, particularly for this theme as enchantment/mystery seem to be common in your poems! ☺️
I think it would be good now to see you use some different language: you use ‘lovely’ and ‘happy/joyful’ a lot in your poems, but these words are quite vague and don’t really mean that much by themselves. Why was the journey ‘lovely’? How was the warmth ‘happy’? Perhaps you could try and use some more specific adjectives appropriate for the nouns they’re describing. 😁
