WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe the feeling of happiness without using the words 'happy', 'joy', 'content' or other closely-related synonyms.

Try to use a variety of metaphorical devices to create an image that emits a sense of happiness.

Morning Rays

The beam of the sun shining through the window highlighted a part of your face. Your eyes were a brighter shade of green, a color I’ve never seen before. When you smiled I looked away. There was a drop in my stomach. A good one. The kind you get after you fall from the highest point of a rollercoaster. I felt my heart rush with this strange warmth. I felt the beat go through my chest. My eyes kept wandering back to yours. My cheeks flushed with a scarlett tint. I felt my eyes open again and there you were, Still standing with the sun on you. A part of me hopes to capture this image forever, A mental picture. The day I felt I was spinning in my highest heels A keepsake forever.
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