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All your wishes begin to come true, but the consequences are not as you imagined.
Uncontrollable
Now eveyone says, “If you could have one wish, what would you wish for?” But why not kill teo birds with ine stone? The brother to the question above is the basic, “if you had one super power, what woudl it be?”
But nobody ever talks about what would happen if thise dreams ever came true. Do they?
If you woke up to find your wish came true, who would you tell? How would you practice? What woudl you use the power for? Would you be good, or bad?
The questions dont seem to come to mind while making the wish, however. Only once they come true.
I gave it thought when It was tiem to make my hopes heard. And my final answer came out to be, “I wish to give anyone whatever super power they want, if I want to. This including myself.” It seemed reasonable enough, with not many loopholes posible.
But when it was granted, I ran my mouth. My first ability, allowed me to turn people real. To change fiction to reality. But I was not satisfied there.
Four kept asking for Triss,
Zade kept hunting adaline,
Alex paid investigators to find Ava,
Patch searching for Nora,
Jacks screaming for Evangaline,
And Aaron fought for Juliette.
And so on. So I asked for the ability to change people back. But I missed them, you see.
I brought them back to me, but this time, made them love me.
I win.
I talked of my gifts to those around me. And I was taken for interviews and interigation. Science labs amd schools.
But I was to hard to contain. Uncontrollable. At least thats what they called me. Numbing my ability to just a mere shell of what it used to be. Im drugged, im chained, and bow i live in this trusty place called Mind.
You see my mind is complex, it is easy to get devoured by thoughts in there. With years to listen and think very strange thinks, I found if you think hard enough, you can still grant a few wishes.
I could have wished to be free, but freedom in conditional. Do the best thibf i could think of, was to talk to you. Talk to you however you are hearing this.
Think of it as a courtesy. When you are granted the opportunity to wish for anything, wish for something meaningful.
And thise around you will turn against you in just a moment once you are doing better than them. They will chain your up and throw your away. And that is the best proof your get that you are, in fact, better.
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Writers Notes in the comments from now on!
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Girl YES! I get so happy under my covers that I curl up in a little ball and hug my stuffed animal so tightly and it feels like way too good💝💝💝 I swear blankets are a gift that’s very under appreciated!
Also I loved this so much, it had so much perspective!!!
You’re an amazing writer 🫶🏼🤍💙
Awwwww thank you! Yeah I told my friends s a bout my Seizures of happiness and they were like… “ what is wrong with this girl? GIRLLL!” And it was so funny🤣
HAHAHAHA😭😭
I love friends like that honestly lol
Oh my gosh I LOVE the concept of this story! And the sorta twist at the ending was sooo good– love you brought everything full circle! Also I have to agree with everyone else in the comments, I was excited when recognized Tobias/Tris 😆 I started a Divergent fanfic with a friend a long time ago but we never finished 😢 Anyways.
Also I love your little writer’s note emojis!
And random note, but seeing other people get happy about the little things in life makes me so happy ☺️
The girl squad thing is a really good question… that’d be sooo cool… I guess I’d call it something like The Nine (or you could modify it to however many members there are in the club) Muses. Cause yknow, Greek mythology. Orrr I could steal cool names from other historical book clubs 😅 C.S. Lewis and JRR Tolkien were part of a writer’s club called The Inklings (which I think is such a freaking cool name). Benjamin Franklin started a club where everyone would write something, and then each person would read their writing out loud and get feedback from the group. They’d also discuss books and stuff. That club was called Junto.
Anyyywho 😅 it’s a great question
Yay everyone seems to know that reference 🤣 I just was talking about how we like in knowingly made a girl squad of just a bunch of supportive girls and o was like, no way we are 100% making a girl squad!
And I am glad you liked the ending n because half way through writing this I was like, “okay what the heck ar you doing Valerie🤣 how are we gonna tie this together” and I just kind of settled🤣
LOVE THE LITTLE DIVERGENT REFERENCE!!!🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩THIS IS SO GOOD AND I LOVE IT SMMMMMM!! YOU’RE SO STINKING CREATIVE OMG!!!🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💕💕💕💖💖💖💖💖💕💖💖💖💖💕💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️ and I think I would call it… 🤔 🙌🏻*picture this hand motion* Letter Ladies🙌🏻😂😭 I’m terrible at naming things but I LOVE alliteration 🤣🤣
OMG ME TOO! Alliteration is so satisfying🤣
Yeah I was so happy making little references to books it made me so happy 🤣 thank you , thank you for the compliment🤍✨🤍🤍✨🤍✨✨🤍✨🤍🤍✨
ALWAYS GIRLY!!💖🥰💕💕💕💖💖🥰💖❤️ILY💖💖
This is awesome! I don’t have an idea for a girl squad currently, but I’ll try to come up with one later today.
Oh I have one! Write More Smile Less (Hamilton reference)
Hamilton>>> I am in love with it!
Omg! I LOVE DIVERGENT!!!! TOBIAS AND TRIS FOR LIFE!
(Spoiler alert ‼️)
Tobias for life. He is my fall for book crush! Through the whole thing im just like already kiss the bride! 👰♀️ 🤵🏼
I KNOW RIGHT!!! The ending brutally murdered me!
Ahhahahahahah!!!🤣🤣
I hate that! Veronica Roth report to my office imedientally!😡
That’s real!
It was 11:40 at night and we were in the car on my way back from a vacation, and I like hard core cried the entire time. I told my dad about it and when they did his POV for the last few chapters I was so done I almost died right then and there😭😭
I woke up my whole family and they were pissed b it I could NOT stop crying!