Prose for the rose is what you want, I suppose
But while I thought, the words caught, with no ideas to support
For flowers have no powers in the darkening hours
So let's not try to jot what we'll soon have forgot.
I love the symbolism of the flowers in this one. It starts off light and rhyming as if it were a children’s book, but then it turned kinda serious and started really defining what it’s like to be stuck, especially as a writer,, I really love this one
This is great Ryan. I’m obsessed with the opening line. I think in some cases rhyme can feel a little contrived but this is so effective and uses it to its full advantage!
Beautiful flow, great structure.
I really enjoyed the internal line rhymes. Thanks for following and liking some of my work!
Brilliant!
