WRITING OBSTACLE

Something you fear has entered your home. Write a deeply descriptive paragraph about the experience.

This could be something tangible (a spider, a snake, etc), or something more abstract (a memory or a threat).

Anxiety

I have opened the door to Anxiety

My one true foe

It claws and it scratches

My one true woe


I could be social

I could have had friends

But Anxiety is my roommate

And hath not paid rent.


I would like to kick out my old friend

But as the wise say

What is familiar to you is

What you will side with till the very end

Comments 16

This poem captures the struggle and frustration of living with anxiety, embodying her as a persistent and unwelcome roommate. The use of vivid images, like scratches and scratches, effectively conveys the impact of anxiety on your life.


Vulnerability and honesty in your words are praiseworthy because you openly express your desire to separate yourself from anxiety and seek a more fulfilling life.


It is important to remember that you are not alone in this fight, and there is support available to help you overcome these difficulties. By recognizing your feelings and expressing them through your writing, you are taking significant steps to heal and grow.


Keep moving forward and continue to use your creativity to find solace and strength. You have the ability to find peace and build a better future.

This absolutely is the best comment I have ever read. Thank you so much friend. I appreciate this comment so much. I am glad that someone likes my writing at least half as much as I do. Keep on making other people’s days because you are amazing at it!!!

Great job Lucian! (can I call you that)? :)

Yeah absolutely!! You definitely have earned that much πŸ˜‚! Thank you so much!

πŸ–€ Relatable…


Except for the friend part. I got a whole hellufa lot of them, just tend to act like an ass when I want to.πŸ˜‚


It’s good, it’s got the vibe and that imaginary beat. I like it.

Thank you! I am glad it was at least semi relatable!πŸ˜‚

File for an eviction maybe? πŸ˜‚

Good work, friend.

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I am tired and need to go to sleep, but decided to write a poem for no reason at all. Help me please!!!!!!

Nothing wrong with that, and it’s a great one also

Thank you so much!!!

No problem my man, continue what you are doing 😊

Thanks dude! I am thinking about writing a book but I am going to wait until my writing skills get a tad better. If you look at my other fantasy stuff you can see that I need a good amount of work with my writing πŸ˜‚

I have done a bunch of long form stories, just keep at it, and you’ll reap your rewards