Emily
Everything feels so overwhelming,
My everything,
I miss you deep down in my bones.
Life is hard to live-I know,
You’re my person and I’ll never leave you, so please don’t leave me.
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Everything feels so overwhelming,
My everything,
I miss you deep down in my bones.
Life is hard to live-I know,
You’re my person and I’ll never leave you, so please don’t leave me.
For spelling and Grammar: Everything is spelled correctly and everything seems to be grammatically correct. Well done.
For voice: It is well written and well executed. Good job.
For general feedback: This is an excellent piece of art. I feel this way as well. I hope you are doing well. Thank you for sharing this with us
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