WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a descriptive paragraph about the experience of seeing the Northern Lights (aurora borealis).
How might you convey the vibrancy and ethereal beauty of this natural phenomenon? Think about how you can evoke all the senses, and feeling of wonder at this destination. (You don't have to have been there yourself!)
Aurora. A Pretty Word
“Ahh” it’s pretty. Wish there was a word to describe it properly. Gorgeous doesn’t fit, beautiful doesn’t at all... what else? Ethereal. It’s a nice word, but still, not the one.
Cold air cutting into your face, breeze blowing and the sound of trees swishing. It’s perfect. Purple, pink, green... all blended together to create the perfect night sky. The northern lights. But ‘Aurora’ sounds better. Aurora. It’s a pretty word.
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I’m 12, and currently writing a novel and I neeeeeeed yall to criticise this!!!!!!! Please do, it would help so much!
