“Ahh” it’s pretty. Wish there was a word to describe it properly. Gorgeous doesn’t fit, beautiful doesn’t at all... what else? Ethereal. It’s a nice word, but still, not the one.

Cold air cutting into your face, breeze blowing and the sound of trees swishing. It’s perfect. Purple, pink, green... all blended together to create the perfect night sky. The northern lights. But ‘Aurora’ sounds better. Aurora. It’s a pretty word.

🔴not part of the writing..

I’m 12, and currently writing a novel and I neeeeeeed yall to criticise this!!!!!!! Please do, it would help so much!