WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Bernard Wicks

Write a poem or story that reads as if it is beautiful, but is actually about something rather tragic.

For example, you might write about a beautiful sunset in an apocalyptic world, or a poem about the good things about heartbreak.

Eternal Sun

Pink and Purple fall

The most glorious thing I have ever seen

The dewy petals shimmer as they go

The fog allows the sun rays to shine

Like nothing I have seen before


You were my sunray

You were my pink and purple

You were the dew on my petals

Like nothing I have seen before


Now you are gone

This is all I have left of you


Even your garden is fading

Still glorious on its way out

Just like you


The winter is coming

I will have no more pink and purple

No more petals in the sun

Just our old memories

That’s all I need


You now have eternal sun

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