POEM STARTER
Submitted by TheQuillPen
Write a poem about giving up.
It doesn’t have to be negative, it can be about giving up something or someone that’s been holding you back.
entry.
I am tired.
A smog has been filling my chest for years,
A poisonous cloud—a metaphoric second-hand smoke.
I inhaled too much of the world,
And coughed up all the effort I could give.
My eyes blink blearily with mourning and grief.
Mourning for a girl I no longer am,
And grief for the woman I grew to be.
I'd like to apologize to my mother
Whom I promised I would try to heal.
I'm sorry,
But I am tired.
I used to be fond of the smell of cigarettes.
They reminded me of my father's friends
Who'd sneak me pocket money for sweets.
But now,
Bitterly,
I am reminded of how frail humans are,
And how easily their lungs blacken.
I am tired.
I don't have it in me to continue this life,
And I'm sorry to everyone I am leaving behind.
You are stronger than I ever got to be.
Goodbye.
Hi this really beautiful, but also want to check in and make sure you’re ok. Or if not ok, at least hanging in there. The world would be a worse place without you in it 🖤