WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of being caught in a thunderstorm without using the words:
Above
Cold
Fall/fell
Down
Focus on all aspects of the situation – the physical sensations, the appearance of the sky and landscape, and potentially the mood of the narrator as part of this.
The Screaming Sky
I always knew this would be the cost of sailing, but I never imagined it would be so high.
She rocked back and forth, ready to collapse any moment now.
But we, her children, wouldn’t let her.
The storm raged against her, but we dared not let her go.
The clouds sought to strike her down with their might, but we dared not let her go.
The hard rain tried to stone her, pushing her to her limit, but we dared not let her go.
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