POEM STARTER
Awakening
Write a poem about an awakening - it could be literal or metaphorical.
POEM STARTER
Awakening
Write a poem about an awakening - it could be literal or metaphorical.
I absolutely love this. You’ve found the words to say what’s been circling my mind for years. Thank you for sharing this man
This is interesting. Free form poetry? I couldn’t detect the writing scheme or pentameter.
It’s definitely a different perspective on awakening. So it’s creative and original in that sense. The focus though seems to be about being “boxed” in. It would have been good to have the speaker talk about how their dreams are being awakened.
It feels a bit abstract. And the style written is a bit hard to read. You start with a rhyming couplet but then it stops.