WRITING OBSTACLE
Describe a strong emotion without saying what it is.
You could use metaphors and creative description, or you could focus on what your senses perceive when you are feeling this emotion.
Nothing But Violent Rage.
Never have I felt my heart clench,
Overflowing my vision with vibrant red,
Touch and shoves turn to hits,
Halting the world’s endless spins;
I can feel my blood boiling over,
Noticing how balled my fists are as
Guts get battered under them.
Bruises my headspace with each hit,
Unable to chill in a preheated oven,
Too stubborn to let anyone stop us.
Violence is never the answer, I’ll agree,
I can’t control myself today,
Oh, how much that bitch has ruined it-
Lighting the fuse with their insolence,
Expecting the bomb to be a dud,
Negligent to the threat I could be,
Till their cowering, hurting beneath me.
Regaining peace is a lost cause,
And I just bleed to make them hurt,
Going, fighting, the wall falls flat,
Each punch retaliated until we collapse.
(I’m not this violent when I’m mad- I just wanted to explore the feeling some people have to where the they feel _nothing but violent rage_ in my writing)
Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it! Great work
Amazing work, I love it!
Thank you so much!! 🫶🏾💕✨
You are most welcome, have an amazing day!
Thank you! I hope you have an amazing day as well! ✨