POEM STARTER
Adelaide T. Everett
Write a poem that starts each new line with the last word of the last line.
For example: I love you so,
So I have to go.
POEM STARTER
Adelaide T. Everett
Write a poem that starts each new line with the last word of the last line.
For example: I love you so,
So I have to go.
I really liked this! It was so hopeful and felt so strong. But to me, I interpreted it as the constant cycle of falling apart and being built back up. The poem seemed unbiased both ways, with the children splashing and having fun, then the ocean taking tears, but then looping back around and showing that same hurt can help us connect and be stronger. I’m not sure if that was how you intended it, but that’s how I interpreted it. Anyway, I really liked it, good job!
You always manage to warm my heart, girl! I love this, and I love that you are in such a good mood. You also just managed to brighten my mood, which is a very difficult thing to do for most people. Lol. Thank you!🩷🩷🩷
This was amazing!!! Wow . . . It is just so amazing. I love the way you used the last word of each line as the start for the next. It made me think that even when we finish something we’ll always hold onto a little part of what we had before. (I don’t know this amazing poem just made me think of that) this was filled with so much emotion it was so sweet and perfect!!!! You should so try a story you’d be amazing at it!!!!!!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😊
i love how it all connects! the ending was beautiful 🫶🏻 i loved it so much ♥️