WRITING OBSTACLE

Your character has been kidnaped by a pirate and trapped in a dark dungeon below deck…

How can they use their other senses to determine where their abductor is taking them?

Salty Water

_The boat goes over waves_

_And waves_


_And_

_W_


_ A_


_ V_

_ E_


_ S_

_Nausea _


_In my stomach_

_The smell of rum_

_Disgusting_

_Vomit on the floor_

_It’s old_

_Determined not to again_

_Creeping wind, a strong breeze, perhaps a gust, maybe a storm_

_Storms aren’t common on my side of the ocean_

_Further_

_Across the sea_

_Where are they taking me?_

**_Creak_**_ _



_A full on storm_


_Perhaps a hurricane_


_Shakes the boat_


_Up and down_

_Maybe a centimeter of water on the floor_

__

_Panic_

_The boat may sink_

_Never figured out_

_Where they tried to take me_

_Not my proudest moment_

_But tongue meets water_

_Salty_

_But not as salty as it could be_

_Not as salty as most seas_

_Pride myself in knowing the taste of each sea_

_But that almost makes it worse_

_Because suddenly_


I know where they’re taking me.

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