POEM STARTER
Submitted by ~ xoxo ~
'Who’s left to trust?'
Write a poem that closes with this line.
Addiction
When my body craves that volatile euphoria
When my mind repudiates serenity
When my heart renounces rescue
When I only seem to deceive myself for the sake of another hit
Who's left to trust?
This so good. It is very brief and short but thrilling.
So good!
Yep, can relate to falling into the trap of knowing your about to do something bad but not being able to stop yourself. A really interesting take ❤️
Definitely! A universal human flaw perhaps? Thank you ☺️
I love this!! the words link together really well and evoke emotion. well done!!
Thank you! ☺️
I know what it feels like to not even trust oneself! This is powerful. Well done with the prompt!!
It happens to us all, maybe not in this form, but surely in another! Thanks for your feedback ☺️
