Hi, I’m a young writer who wants some feedback, I know I’m not that good and that there’s tons of room for improvement, but I’m crazy dramatic and love writing. Thus why I’m here.
Hi, I’m a young writer who wants some feedback, I know I’m not that good and that there’s tons of room for improvement, but I’m crazy dramatic and love writing. Thus why I’m here.
A single scream is all it takes to ruin someone. A single scream can haunt you worst then any ghost, a scream can tear you apart piece by piece, with no mercy at all. A scream can be a persons downfall. Believe me, I know, I was the one who had to watch my sister go mad because of that scream, my scream.
Some say I got worst off because I was the one who died in that accident, but I don’t think s...
If there was one thing Ezmira knew, it was that time didn’t slow, not for anybody. No matter how hard you beg, no matter how much you cry, no matter how much pain you were in, time is and always would be, merciless.
For she knew pain, it was taught to her at a young age.
she experienced it, and was taught to inflict it as well.
“One needs to experience it to do it efficiently,” her mother would w...
I could feel blood welling around my hands and flowing down my dress as I pressed my hand to the wound.
Every step I took I could feel the world spin around me and darkness creep at the edge of my vision.
The garden, I just had to make it to the garden.
I pushed open the doors to the large castle and groaned, pain slicing me inside to out, tears streaming down my face silently as I made my way to...
Cold, yet beautiful. Val looked up at the lady in the white flowing gown . she looked transparent, always flickering in and out of view, her ebony hair a curtain in front of her face, so Val couldn’t see any of her features. Yet she radiated a chilly beauty that even Val, at 12 years old could sense.
“Who are you?” Val breathed, pushing aside her brown ringlets of hair away from her face.
The lady...
Asher never missed. His aim was always precise and steady. so as he crouched in a bush, the leaves scratching against him, he felt confidence burst through him. He would get her, and when he did, he would live like a king off of the money he was going to make.
A crackle sounded and Asher had his bow drawn in mere seconds. And then there she was. Her skin resembled a starry night sky, the black shi...
Bad. This was very very bad. All my stuff..... gone, all my precious items...lost. My notebooks with all my story ideas, my laptop. Everything, my entire carrier as an author in that bag. Breath, just breath.
My hand goes to the unopened luggage and i tug the zipper open, maybe there’s something I can use to track down the owner, maybe they made a mistake too and grabbed my bag. The rooms freezin...
POV: Victim
The attacker gently pressed a sharp edged knife against James skin and he let out a whimper as a thin line of blood appeared.
The attacker let out a laugh, the sound raspy and loud against the silent night. Itp sounded feminine, but he couldn’t be sure, all he could see were two crazed eyes staring at him with a loathing that could wither flowers where they stood.
His attacker leaned ...
Nym was tired of waiting. Her father hadn’t looked at her at the start of the feast and still refused to look at her as if ignoring her would make her hate filled eyes go away.
Her sister sat across from her staring at her with a huge fake smile on her face, but her indigo eyes held warning.
A warning that Nym ignored. If her father was going to act like his decision was for the good of her, w...
The cage that has kept me bound is slowly being drained. I can feel my strength returning as the deep depths of the water surround me, pushing against me from all angels. The surface is calling me, I can feel it. The devious water that has kept me locked tight has taken a toll on me , my once long dark hair is now as white as snow because of the cage that kept my magic at bay, even now when the ca...
Dead, their all dead. I watched as blood poured down their throats, I watched as they sunk to the ground, I watched it, but I couldn’t do anything. Dead, their all dead. My only true family, one that didn’t abandon me, Taylee, with her soft eyes and pale hair, Garrison, with his dark skin and easy smile, and Zella, with her wit and fire. Gone forever because of them, the evil that lurks on the kin...