young writer
Just a 5 grader trying ti learn to write a book worth publishing
young writer
Just a 5 grader trying ti learn to write a book worth publishing
Just a 5 grader trying ti learn to write a book worth publishing
Just a 5 grader trying ti learn to write a book worth publishing
I ran in to the woods so excited thinking man its been a while since i been back here. But i cant wait to see what i will find thought izzy. You now what i will take a new path today i started walking making shure to pay attention to everything.I jumped when u saw it a red fox den i never seen one in person before and now i see one rite now!!! Man will my siblings love to heare about this i ran ti the door when i was stopped by michle.
“Hi michle how are you doing “ “Good ypu i seen you so happy just wanted to see what your so happy about” “Found a red fox den” “Thats cool i got a go” “K bye “
Now where was i yes im going to show my mom and siblings the red fox den i ran up to the door and swung it open.
“Hey come with me i want to show you a fox den”i said exited “No i dont want to” “Ok here look at this picture no go away no one cares about your stupid fox dens and exploring”
“Oh ok” i said as i sulked away man i really thought they wuld like it i gusee its just me well now its not fun any more jm going to bed Izzy said to her self.
I woke up and ran downstairs to the broun cabnit and frabbed the last strabery pop tart. I had been waiting all night for this pop tart even dreaming about it but enough time has been wasted i will eat the pop tart.
I opend the shiny but crinkley rapper and took the strawberry poptart out and it was inches frome my mouth when my brother came running in with the dog and shoved int me and my poptart flue on to the ground.I gasped and reched for the pop tart but the family dog snached them up and ate them. I screamed at my brother for being so carlesss that was the last pop tart and now i cant eat it .
Mercury woke up to a sweet and sugary smell of french toest.Mercury ran douwn the stairs and said”goood morning mother”ivery/mercury mom Ivery said “well good morning to you too.” Mercury smiled and said”breakfast smells amazing “ Ivory”well thank you but you have to eat quickly”mercury said”why mom”in a confused tone.”ivory “because it is lavandors birthday she turnes 13”mercury “ohhh I forgot a present “we’ll figure it out “ivory said frustrated.
Mercury quickly ate then ran upstairs to pick out a outfit.Mercury looked up and down just to find her jean shorets and black sweat shirt.With a white dear head on it wich was the only one not stained frome mud.She then shouwerd and got dressed.Dried and brushed her hair then she braided them into two large french twist braids.
She then ran down the stairs practically flying when.Ivery yelled”no running”Mercury said “ok fine.”Then agin ivory said”you can not leave until you clean that rat nest of a room”Mercury anoyed and also mad said why where you looking at my room”.I gave birth to you young lady now clean it or dont go “ok fine”mercury said anoyed.She ran to her room and and started organizing and sorting stuf.While thinking hey atleast i got of easy i ushully have laundry,dishes,and the chikens.She fineshed organizing her shelf and stared making her bed.
She took the sheet douwn stairs and grabbed a new one.She thought it was stupid to change her sheets every day.She didn’t wet the bed she was not a baby anymore.But she put the floral sheet and blanket one the bed then flufed the pillows.
Mercury eventually finished cleaning her room and ran doun stairs.She said mom”i finished cleaning my room”ivory said”that was only 15 minutes you culd not of “i did”mercury insisted “shelf organized,bed made,dresser organized close put up and room spotles.” Mercury was now anoyed ivory said “ok i will check.”So the went upstairs and stunned ivory said”it is spotless go a head and go to lavanders”exsded mercury said thank you thank you i love you so much”ivory no problem love you to.”
Mercury ran downstairs and slipped on her boots then ran out the door.She quickly unleashed tracker her german short haired pointer.and tied a rope that was connected to the chicken feed on to traker.Mercury than gave him a comaned”feed.”She then opened the pen and tracker ran at the spoed of light.She wisled unhooked tracker and closed the chiken pen. The she gave him a good pat and said”you wuld win a race aginst the flash.”She then gave him a treat since he helped feed the chikens he deserves a paycheck.Mercury the said”we are going to lavanders and she loves dogs so you can come.”Tracker just gave a confused head tilt and barked.Mercury laghed and said”your such a cutie.”
The two then walked down the rode when they seen a boy frome glass lacke rige.Wich was the school she and lavender went to.He stoped mercury and said “i love the dog what is he”mercury replied “he is a german shorthair pointer and his name is traker” nervously because she hates talking to people” alex”by the way i am alex are you coming to lavanders party mercury “”yep did she send you to get me “alex replied “yep i told her you wont reconize me because i am ushely at school when you are with lavender.”Mercury well tell her i will be there shortly “alex”ok.”Mercury and tracker kept walking in the other way tored the backery.Mercury really does not like talking to people but she new alex and he was 15 only to years older so not a big deal.Alex looked different frome the rest of the family but he was definitely lavanders sibling.
Why mercury thought that is because he has light brown hair and a black stripe but the rest of the family has blonde hair with a black stripe.He also has curly hair but the rest have pin straight hair.But he was definitely a rose wich was the family llast name but mercury knows this because on murdia every family has a picifick trait. Lavanders family the roses was a black hair stripe hers was a star on the wrist.He has a black stripe and cream. Colerd hornes like most merudians she has black hornes though.He also has blue eyes like the rest of the family.So he is most definitely a rose.
Mercury relized she had been thinking so long she had arived to the backery.She then walked in with tracker.And thought ok lavender absolutely loves chocolate.so we shuld get a chocolate cake with chocolate chips.Mercury than walked over to a worker that goes by alby and she said”excuse me do you have a chocolate cake with chocolate chips.” Alby said”why yes we did that will be 30 merudian coins”mercury “ok here you go”alby said “ok thank you here is your cack”he says delighted to make a sale
Mercury then leaves the backery and is talking to traker about how she cant wait to give this to lavander.And how she is just so delighted and eager to talk to lavander agin.when she just keeps talking trakers ear of and she says sorry traker i am pretty talkative you probably already know that afterall i am your owner.
Then she arives home and puts the cake in the fridge.After realizing that she was 2 hours early and had the rong time.Ivory then says”what are you doing home so soon honey “mercury then says”i was going to be 2 hours early if i went i had the rong time”She explained joyfully because now she had time to by that crouwn lavander has been wanting for ages.
Her mom said ok well go ahead and have fun I will mercury said exidely.So she heded to the jewelry store.She started to walk when traker got of his coller. She chased after him so angery that he was being a fool.Mercury almost got hit by a truck because of traker but she eventually got hime and draged him home.where she scolded him.Then heded back out agey but when she arrived at the jelery store she lightened up
Mercury is a strong independent girl with trust issues and she only really trust her friend lavander she was born on meruda and grew up there she loves to go on adventures to the dark woods wich noone nows why its called that but they like to go there and go to the glass lake so they can test the water but it is completely normal just has a lot of fog and water as clear as glass she also has a dog named triger who is a coon dog and is trie cullerd with green eyes and a hores named racer who is an arabin quorter hores mix and is blake with red eyes he is stong but very sweet the come on some adventures but not all becuse triger cant swim
Lavender is a sweet kind hearted girle whoe has no persepshoin of danger and trusts everyone she is bestfriends with mercury and also loves to go on advenchures but her favorite place to go is the medowe with gorgeous flowers she also has animales she has two cats one is sweet tart and the other is sugar cookie they are both ragdoll cats and sweet tart is pure white with blue eyes while on the other hand sugare cookie is white with green eyes and two gray spots around his eyes lavander loves both cats equally and she also has a hores named ghost whoe is pure white with blue eyes he is sweet put protective if a nother hores is there
I now i dont have punctuation or correct grammer or spelling on most things but i just want to now if they seem like good carecters and a good start fore some ideas and pleas be honest and leave ideas or helpful stuff have a nice day
Izzy wakes up and takes a shower then gets dressed. She then goes to work and starts taking orders.Things are slow so some people go home early but izzy stays.
She goes behind the counter and waits because she had passed out all the orders.wich where toest,eggs,pancakes and fruit.After some time lily her friend frome back home comes in.
and says “hi we havent talked in so long”
Izzy says “i no i have been dying to get your number”
Lily says “me to”
So they exchange numbers and talk for a while about how it is back home and what its like hear.A few more customers come in so.
Izzy says “ihave to go we will talk later”
Lily says “ok i will wait here”
So izzy takes there orders.and when she comes back out she is juggling three trays of food and five drinks.Izzys thinks to herself man it’s getting hectic. So Izzy passes the food out when she tries to get customers seeted and take orders.A very rude and arrogant man says “
“i have been waiting for my order for twenty minutes.”
So izzy says “there are only two peple working today sorry for the wait”
The arrogant man says “i will not wait enylonger”
Izzy says “ok feel free to leave “
So the arrogant man leaves and izzy thinks to herself man it is caiose .So after an hour izzy finally every one is in seats and is passing out orders.So izzy passes out the last of the orders and goes over to talk to lily.
Izzy says “you didn’t have to wait lily but thank you “
Lily replies “oh your fine and your welcome “
So izzy and lily finly can cachup on things once they are done .izzy makes shure every single person has left including lily so she can safely close the bilding.Izzy then goes home and goes to bed.
Izzy was 17 uears oled when she moved out and went to Chicago.
Izzy was on the train looking out the windo when she saw a beautiful medowe woth gold and lavender floures just like the medowe back home .She fell asleep and soon awakened to the train Conductor saying “chicogo we have arrived at Chicago.” So Izzy hurried of the train and unloaded captin still as butifule as ever enen at 9 for a hores.Izzyhoped on captin and rode to her house where she put captin and lavander up and went to bed.
When Izzy awakened she cleaned her house and fed captin and lavender like she did baxk home.She then ate pankakes with blueberries and strawberries
“It was good”said Izzy She the did the dishes,landre,sweptand moped then she showered and left to town.When she came back she got captin taked up in his fouery tack then lavender in her flower harness.She then rode to toun and ate tocoes she then went to a agility course fore lavander where lavander one!
After the course she went home and aplied for a waitress job.she eminently got a reply she got the job! And then she took a nape and hade a wonderful dreem about her chieled hood. She dreamed of golden roses and blue flowers with yellowe sunflowers.And she was swaying in her favorite tree while reading her favorite book then it all ends.
It is 6:00am and she will be late for work so she quickly got dressed and galleped to work she barely made on time.Wance she arived she immediately started taking orders ande had passed meny orders out.Some wore chiken soup,chiken,saled,and alot more.She worked frome 6:00 am to 8:00pm when she got home she was exhausted abd webt to bed when she dreamed of that sweet french toest smell and strawberries.She woke up and went to worke on time and maneged to keep the scudrell going.
Izzy has now worked as a waitress at dennys for a year and she loves it.It is her favorite job and she often meats kind peole and is kind back. she is wonderfuly happy with her new life.
I was getting in my scooby doo halloween costume when my mom said “hury up lily” I said “ok” We then rushed out the door to are mamas for the halloween party about 30 monutes in mom said “ come on kids lets go trile or treating “ Like enykids wuld we rushed dounstaires and out the door. We started walking to different houses are moms explained that thoes houses dont jave lights on becouse they dont do Halloween. We all said ok wethen went house to house when we came to our last one.we nocked no answer when are paprents came to the door and a mane with too reall loking green and cloudy gray eyes came to the door.Are mom said go take the candy frome the nice man I said”no” when my older sister mary pushed me and said “dont be a baby “ I said”i am not a baby”!so i went up and took the candy.As we walked away i culed tell he was waching me so i gripped my moms haned until we got to pur gramas.Once got there we ate pizza and cale while our parents cheked our candy.We then ate that candy and we all left exept me and my older sister mary and my mom and dad we stayed and played longer than the others.
We where home and i was siting in my room when taptaptap came frome the windows i looked nothing.Tapraptaprap on the window nothing.untile ouer mom awoke to a horible blood curdiling screem frome me the man with freen skin and gray eyes was in our house.Our naighbores called the police.our dad grabed the shot gun and stepped behind the alien and had the gun to his head while are mom was taking us behined her. She said “ dont be worried its ok” I was to young to understand enything except this alien was in our house. Marry said”i am not worried”! The alien turened arouned and luounched at our dad but our father was queike and killedot. when the police came they took the alien and cleaned the mess up.
2 years later and marry my sister is nicer and does not go to therapy enymore my mom and dad our fine and so am i.We havent seen or heard of enthing like that to this day but you never nowadays
The elegent lady was running in the feiled with butifle golden and lavanger flowers when she tripes over a rute and lands on her head. She gets up and starts to walke back home because her mother called and so she went home and went to bed.She then wakes up does her chores and takes a shower she the gets dressed in a a pink flannel shirt and overalls shorts.Her mom calles her to eat and she smells this butifel smell like cinnamon and strawberries She gusses to her self i bet my mom made toest and strawberries . She went doun and said “ i gisset right her mom asks what and izzy replied oh i gussed you made strawberries and toest “ Her mom said well you guest right go do your chores now
Izzy replied ok love you mom
Izzy ran to the barn and got her black and white border callie named lavender and gave her a command to feed the chikens and lavander did just that draging to food thrue the chikens, cows,and ducks pen.Once lavender came back izzy gave her a bone and said your the beat girel ever than went and got captain her elagent stalion querter hores arabian mix. Then she rode him thrue the flowery medowe to the tree where she climed to a thick branch and read like she normialy did.Izzys mom called and she was geting ready to get out of the tree when she felt dizzy and fell to the grouned.When izzy woke up she was in the hospital where she said “what happened “ Miss feyona the docter said”your alright you fell out of that oled tree Izzy said”oh no all i remember was geting up and then every thing went dark” Miss feyona said”its alright you only have a concussion but if it wernt fore that dog of yours you might not be ok” Izzy said “what do you mean” Feyona said “that hores got spooked by a cyote and kid the tree when he did it fell on you” Izzy said”is lavander and captin ok” Miss fyona said” Yes dear they are both fine captin was scared but he stayed right by you the howl tym wile lavender got help” Izzy said “wow i had no clue they wuld do that for me “ Fiona said”most wuldent but you have very speahile animales “ Izzys mom said “lets go darling” Izzy said”ok mom”
The next few weeks go by fast izzy is now ridding captin and do agilty courses with lavander agin.It is izzys firest day back in the medowe captin gets spooked but it ends up being ok .Once they get to the fallen tree izzy hops of and takes lavender to a racoon den and soon izzy finds herself with a treed racoon izzy wisles and labander comes izzy pats lavander and they both leave.Izzy then gets home ready fore a show they go to a show jumping competition and izzy and captin wines.Then they go to a dog showe lavender is 2th place and they go home and head to bed.