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Hello! Trying to improve my writing, ended up with mostly poems. I would greatly appreciate criticism. Somehow I have 80 unfinished drafts x. NF fan♫She/her☾14♪INFP-T♪☆I have OCD☆I feel like I can't write, but I try. Have a great day♥︎ ♬My playlist♬:

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Loss

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1 min read

I spit blood out of my mouth,

Wiping away the salty taste on my teeth with my tongue.

Watching as light creeps, solemn, into the sky.

I cradle the sun in my hands.

There is scurrying,

Of mice,

Across the floor,

Pitiful and shaming squeaks,

I turn away as my body falls,

Apart.

Inside,

My organs are burning,

Twisting,

Angry,

My memories

Sliding down my brain.

Like an avalanche.

Liquid

Throths at my ...

Poetry

Rejection Rose

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1 min read

Roses

Rows and rows of roses

Rotting roses composing in the compost

Disclosing a secret no one else knows

Each red rose shows love that grows and then slows

As thorns cut the woes of wounds weeping and bleeding red onto petals

Infesting bugs medle, ripping, shredding, ending life

The heart's chords strike with strife

Each string cut like each snipped flower

Given weakly and meekly to the prouder

D...

Poetry

Lemons

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1 min read

Bitter juice seeps out of yellow flesh

A vile taste reaps stinging wounds afresh

You cut your tongue on your acid words

And yet I'm the problem? That's absurd

But of course once the hate is all squeezed out

You're completely sweet, feigning innocence, as if this is just merely a bout

And I guess you need extra ingredients to polish off personalities

Personally, I don't see how sugar-coated lies co...

Poetry

Turn it Off

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1 min read

My skin is flaky,

My hands are shaking.

It's right there.

And yet I don't _want _to touch it.

But I'm being screamed at anyway

Like my nervous system will collapse

So I do.

And then I turn the faucet on.

And try to remember what the books told me,

How to distract myself

But I can't.

And I feel like-

_I'm going to die. _

And sometimes,

I wish I could carve out my brain,

Smash it against...

Poetry

Unsafely Baked

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3 min read

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It’s the prompt! I swear! I just reeaaally wanted to try to write in this setting, don’t know if I did well.

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The warm smell of fresh cookies wafted through the air. Noel breathed in the faint taste of melted butter and baked bread. The bakery was still, caught between the lull of the sunrise, devoid of all customers but them. The dusty floorboards creaked softly...

Peaceful Ghosts

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2 min read

I sit on the edge of the thick stone wall, swinging my legs back and forth. I watch as the orange in the sky is swallowed by the creeping night, wind whistling through the graveyard. Blades of grass flitter around along its current, disrupting the stillness of the night. I tap my fingertips against the cold stone, waiting. Mosquitoes buzz and bite my bare skin. I slap them away. Eventually, The Re...

ABC XYZ

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1 min read

Abandon abusive advice

Blinding, bitter, bizarre

Callous crone, chaos can cease caution

Death does dance dearly during doom

Each emotional enemy endangers escape

For fabricated faces fake false feeling

Generosity grants greed growth

Habit hammers harsh hate

Ignore immoral increase

Jugment just joints jealousy

Keep kindness known

Listen, lose loneliness like love loses logic

Manage malice, mend men...

Downhill

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1 min read

A simple misdeed,

Then where does that lead?

What’s the price of crime?

Petty theft is no more than a dime,

Soon you’re sinning left and right,

Taking risks and starting fights,

The anger and relentlessness within,

Can’t be calmed, and morals dim,

What’s a little punishment if you get what you want?

Demanding things in a thicker font,

Brutal clashing chasms has no effect,

Eventually you’ve lost al...

Poetry

Monsters

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1 min read

A nice breeze on a summer day

Bright flowers fall away

They wither under the sun’s intruding rays

What are the monsters that come?

Thoughts rebound again and again

A new challenge, I am condemned Sleepless nights, mistakes to amend

The door is open, why would the monsters come?

Flashes of sorrow dance around

This terrible feeling is newfound

I gently cry as I fall to the ground

The door is op...

Poetry

“O”h

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1 min read

Obscure thoughts

Obsessions that haunt

Obsolete memories

Orthodox or not

“Okay” is a checkpoint

Owned by the normal lot

Open to suggestions

One day I might

Offer an alternative

Of something I won’t fight

Obligatory solutions

Orbiting my mind

One day soon I hope the conclusions of this

Orchestra will stop....

Poetry