TheBookLover

I’m just a teen writer here to improve my writing! Any feedback helps, thanks!

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TheBookLover

I’m just a teen writer here to improve my writing! Any feedback helps, thanks!

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The Shadow In The Sea

TheBookLover

1 min read

Why did I decide to do this?

Why did I decide to go on a nice boat trip by myself?

Fear builds up in me, body shaking as I look below my boat…a gigantic shadow of some sea beast lurks below.

I stand still in my boat shocked and fearful for my own life. Fearing that if I move an inch the beast will come up from below the sea and swallow me and my boat full.

Suddenly a bigger boat comes up behin...

Action

Adventure

The Chains We Detain

TheBookLover

1 min read

(I’m not sure if this will make sense or not but I tried my best!)

Chains. The object can be both literally or figuratively. For example you could have chains on your wrists connected to something, that would be literally, or maybe instead it could be figuratively like a certain thought or memory holding you back from doing certain things like trying to make friends. Chains prevent us from doing ...

Poetry

The Hardest Goodbye

TheBookLover

3 min read

(I’m inserting another part of chapter 1 of my story A Gala of Knives and Shadows, I guess this is part two of the aftermath of my last post (the accident), anyway enjoy!)

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As I’m investigating the ballroom I find a piece of dark cloth that was stepped on by the people in the ballroom. I picked it up and held onto it for now since it’s at least something that could lead me to the assassin. I wa...

Adventure

Mystery

The Accident

TheBookLover

4 min read

(I’m not really going by the prompt but instead I’m inserting a scene from my WIP book A Gala of Knives and Shadows, plz give me feedback on how I can improve, thanks and enjoy!)

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I get up off my bed and smooth out my gown. I looked at myself in my mirror one last time, I can’t believe mother made my gorgeous black off the shoulder dress, with small diamonds dotting the ruffled skirt. It’s quite...

Mystery

Crime

Skeletons Of Halloween

TheBookLover

1 min read

Some people hate skeletons because they remind them of their dead relatives corpses. But it’s the season of October and Halloween is finally here, where other people like to dress up in spooky costumes and decorate their houses in spooky decorations, and for Skull the skeleton Halloween is the perfect time to walk around the town of Hollowsville and trick or treat. Instead of eating regular meals ...

Adventure

Horror

The Last Battle Of The Arachno-bots

TheBookLover

1 min read

In the year 3046 humans have explored and created technologies beyond their capabilities. Some of these technologies got so dangerous that the humans who created the robots decided to develop a new kind of robot that looks like a giant spider to maintain the chaos of the other technology creations. That creation got corrupted as well and turned against the humans killing most of them. The humans e...

Fantasy

Action