Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Lola

Using the horror or thriller genre, depict a family outing.

Nothing horrifying has to happen in the plot, but use the typical tropes of horror or thriller to misleadingly describe the outing.

Writings

What A Bargain!

“There’s been 15 family slaughters in the past two months here.”

“I said we’ll take it! Not often you get to go camping for a price like that!” Ned said to the booking agent on the phone.

So soon, Ned, his partner Dave, and their daughter Amy went camping. “Is anyone creeped out that we’re the only ones here? And it’s completely silent, no birds or anything?” Amy asked her dads as they set up tents.

“No, not really. I mean there is a guy in the trees holding a big knife, maybe he scared the birds away?” Dave said, busying himself with the grill. “Who wants hot dogs?”

Noon turned to evening, and by morning the family woke up to a surprise. All their food was gone, and the grass had been burned into a message - LEAVE NOW.

“Hmm.” Ned mused. “Probably kids.”

“Kids? Kids took all our food and burned a evil message in the ground?” Amy asked, disbelieving. “We should go.”

“It’s only been one night.”

So they stayed. The second morning bought skulls around their tents, the third a huge dead deer torn to shreds which Dave cooked up. The fourth night it rained blood. Still they stayed. Until…

The fifth night bought candles and robed figures that accompanied them. They circled the tattered tents, and hummed until the family woke.

“All right! Let’s do this!” Ned announced, emerging. “You have violated the ‘sceptres and ghosts’ code by over killing. I am inspector Ned, this is a violation warning. Next time we will be bringing you in.”

The figures scuttle away, and the morning brings birds and a fresh supply of food back in their tents.

“What did you do, dad?” Amy asks. “I was so scared!”

Ned stirs his coffee in his camping mug. “I bluffed, hon.” And takes a long sip.

A Family Adventure

We all wear black to ensure the blood doesn’t show on our clothing. Mother decides to wear her pearl earrings, not caring if they get stained. Though, can pearls get stained? We all get into Father’s car, it’s fast and sleek, perfect for a good getaway. Deven puts on his headphones for the car ride, hyping himself up. I carefully study our plan in my notebook, but my nails distract me. Soon they’ll be bloodied, but, at least it’ll be for fun.

“Alright, now, we’re in and out, okay, I don’t want any funny business,” Father says as we park at our destination. “And Deven, no fooling around with the bait. We can’t risk getting caught.” The night’s darkness cloaks us as we walk through the gates, being careful to be as quiet as mice. Father slowly brings us closer and closer to our target, motioning us to be quick, yet quiet. Mother parts her way to grab the needed materials for clean up as Deven and Father go unlock the door. I’m the distraction. I carefully climb up a ladder near a window and slip through without any noise. I see him. He’s even more terrifying in person, but I don’t let him reach my nerves. I see a flash of red and know it’s Father signal. I need to distract…now. “Hello,” I say, getting his attention. Slowly he prowls near me. Father and Deven creep close near me, their hands covered in blood. They throw something at the creature and he leaves me. I breathe. I walk towards Father and Deven as they hand me a lamb’s bone, soaked in blood. Mother comes in with a broom and bucket. We all watch as the unique nocturnal black panther devours the food we’ve given him.

After we washed up, Father smiles at us all. “I knew this would work, sneaking you guys into the exhibit.” I spot his silver zookeeper badge sparkling in the moonlight. Mother smiles as well. “I still can’t believe I feed the panther!” Deven exclaims. “I still can’t believe he saw me,” I whisper.

The family’s zoo adventure was sure a fun one.