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POEM STARTER
Submitted by Laura
'As I looked into your eyes, I saw my future go up in flames.'
Write a poem or short story that contains this line.
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As I looked into your eyes, I could see my future go up in flames
I know I shouldn't be thinking this way, but I'd let you ruin my life time and time again
When I look into your eyes, I can feel the heat boil over my body, the dark brown in them bring a smile to my face
I know what is on your mind when you look at me this way
With that look, I am a player in your game
A loud thunder rolls through ...
I loved your eyes you knew that
All day I would stare into ur brown starry eyes
In the sun they sparkled and had a hint of green in them
It was fascinating to me how they always looked green or honey brown
They were the most beautiful eyes I’ve ever seen
Looking in ur eyes made me feel at home I felt safe
But then the end when I told u it was over
When I looked at u it was just dark
When u ...
When I met you
The first thing I noticed where your eyes
As blue as the sky
As deep as the ocean
As beautiful as the moon
The eyes that caught my eye
That made me believe you where the one
The one for me
They showed me kindness
They showed me love
But when I saw your eyes
I knew one thing
As I looked into your eyes,
I saw my future go up in flames
Knowing you would leave
Though those...
crash!
the bowl once in my hand now shattered on the floor
whack!
a fist pounds my face once more
so small
so weak
so tall
so bleak
my blurry vision trails up your body and reaches your face
so cold
so dark
as i looked into your eyes, i saw my future go up in flames
so much anger
so much pain
so much hurt you can’t contain
so you punish me instead
but i can’t let you do this any longer
i ha...
As i look in your eyes,
i saw my future go up in flames.
The world suddenly stopped,
Nothing, not even a worry,
My life suddenly calm
Dreaming of a day
Coming home to see your face
Lifeless worries
Looking in your eyes
Feeling your pain
The future up in flames
I’ll take away your pain,
You have the world in your hands
A universe in your smile....
How to you capture a lifetime of love in just a few sentences?
When your heart is so full, words come as a fountain rather than a flow
Feelings cannot always translate to words
In fact, the easiest way to express how I feel is to relive our memories again and again
In this lifetime and the next.
Where my actions are the words, my loyalty my vow.
I can’t imagine loving you more than I do ...
As I looked into your eyes, I saw my future go up in flames.
When you turned and looked my way, I thought that I was gonna marry you someday.
Now someday is over- it’s come and gone away.
The ring you placed on my finger, felt heavy when I saw that you had kissed her.
Her lips touched every precipice that was once mine.
She made you turn your head on a dime, smoothed talked you into taking...
“Don’t walk out on me”
Tears fall from my eyes, making a slow and tortorous path down my cheeks. I stare at the love of my life putting his shoes on, his belongings packed into one weekender bag now slung over his shoulder.
“Cass, we aren’t good for each other” his words claw at my heart and my vision grows blurrier. I want to step towards him and force him to stay, that maybe if he spends one...
As I looked into your eyes, I saw my future go up into flames.
It was a look I had not seen before, so I took my time to analyze it. To be sure.
Never in my worst nightmare would this be my reality. Unfortunately, the premonition was real.
Manifested itself two months later.
I desperately wish you’d kept your eyes closed....
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