Writing Prompt

STORY STARTER

The horses in the stable went wild; they knew of the coming storm.

Write a story that starts with this sentence. Is the 'storm' literal or metaphorical?

Writings

The 10 Furlong Storm

The horses in the stable went wild; they knew of the coming storm. After months of the same routines with the same noises and smells, the twenty horses spread down the alley knew exactly what was in store for them. Their bodies reacted to the stimulation around them before their minds could find any sort of rationalization or recognition of what was about to happen. The pawing of hooves and the chorus of nickers spread down the alley as more and more of the herd recognized what was to come. The Storm the humans called it. To the horses, it was just another work day, another chance to do what their bodies pulsed to do above all else. There's something special about the heart of a racehorse. A true winner has a special vibration through their core when it comes to race day. And it was palpable in the rows of stalls today. As the jockeys and trainers and owners hurried around to make final preparations, it became increasingly difficult for the horses to contain their energy. There was nothing like the feeling of being able to stretch your legs further than you thought was ever possible before you felt the adrenaline of a race day. As they strutted past the crowds doing their warm-up laps, everyone's pulses - horse and human alike - were beating so fast and so hard you could practically feel the earth shake beneath their feet. The call was made over the loudspeakers and the athletes began their parade to the track. The deafening noise from the warm-up area was muted as they entered the tunnel to pass under the grandstands and enter the race track; the final moment of the closest thing they could find to calm before the greatest storm of their career. The final preparations were made and horses with their jockeys were led into the starting gate. 20 gates clicked shut. 20 horses huffed with anticipation. 20 jockeys secured their goggles. 40 hearts raced with anticipation. Everything around them slowed down as everyone on the track and in the grandstands took a collective and final deep breath. As everyone's lungs filled with air with an eerie momentarily falling over the anxious audience, the buzzer went off and the gates flew open. With that, the crowds erupted with cheers and they were off. The storm of hooves and dirt and racing hearts hit them like a category 5 hurricane. The kind of storm you can't look away from while it steals the air from your lungs. For 10 furlongs, horse and rider faced it all together. The push and the pull of the fury of wind and waves of earth-quaking hoof falls swooped through Churchill Downs. The most beautiful storm you ever did see and the best seat in the house was on the backs of the animal athletes who would run until their hearts burst if the jockeys allowed it. The only storm anyone in Kentucky ever prayed for and one that came but once a year. To the horses, it was just another day of working the job they love. They lived for the storm they created.

The Oneironaut

There was a word for it, a lucid dreamer, someone who can navigate the sea of dreams. Faster and faster the carriage raced. Lightning flashed. The horses screams as she yanked on the reins. Rounding a curve, she careened over the edge and fell down forever. She reached up for that word. it escaped.ļ»æļ»æ Still wrestling with the vestiges of a dream, Jasmine fought the morning. As a farmerā€™s daughter she couldnā€™t fight for long. With a groan, Jasmine flung her sweat soaked bedding away. Her bare feet slapped against her childhood bedroom floor. For a moment she was nine years old ready to do chores before grammar school then she blinked into a thirty-nine divorcĆØ. A loud neigh from the stables shook her.

standing, she went for her barn boots. Petrichor scented the air. The room swam and Jasmine slammed into the floor. Stunned, she lay still. Since the pandemic there was no chance of extra farm hands. In fact she hadnā€™t seen a neighbor or even a passing car in weeks. Wavering she climbed onto her hands and knees.

ā€Jazzy, you okay?ā€

Her mamaā€™s voice coming up the staircase shook Jasmineā€™s awake. More loud braying and stomping, the horses were still going wild. she shoved her feet into her boots. On jelly legs, Jasmine stumbled down the stairs. shrugging into her flannels Jasmine lumbered into the kitchen. ļ»æļ»æ potatoes and onions fried in bacon grease hung in the air. Jasmine swayed and steadied herself on the kitchen door jam. Jody and her heights over the years were scratched into the old frame along with her fatherā€™s and his fatherā€™s. Dorie and Alex looked up at her entrance. Dorie turned from the cast iron skillet and hurried towards her daughter. outside thunder rumbled.ļ»æļ»æ ā€œgoddamn it Dorie! Quit babying that girl. Thatā€™s why she fucks up everything she touches,ā€ Alex shouted, pounding his fork on the kitchen table. ļ»æļ»æ Dorie and Jasmine froze, waiting for him to stop. Taking in her daughterā€™s flushed features and red rimmed eyes, fear chilled Dorieā€™s heart. Covering her mouth with a trembling hand, Dorie turned back to the stove. Jasmine lurched towards the back door heading across the dying pasture for stable. Outraged, Alex maneuvered his wheelchair in jerky motions. ļ»æļ»æ ā€œcheck those damn horses. This is not some kind of vacation. Your mother and I worked our fingers to the bone for your lazy ass. If your brother was still here.ā€

her fatherā€™s voice prodded her back with every step. Rain threatened under petulant clouds. Grass blades waved and rippled. Thunder clashed in the stable. Jasmine drove into the cool grassy waves. Saltwater stung her eyes. One of the horses kicked open its stall. A fork tongued satyr screamed something from the shore. Leathery tentacles reached for her silver tail. Jasmine darted away from danger.

A winged stallion soared overhead. Jasmine broke the surface to watch the entire herd take to the air. Another shout further away pulled at Jasmine. She knew she should turn and swim back. But without looking back, Jasmine the Oneironaut swam away free.

Horse

ā€œWhatā€™s all the noise in the stable about?ā€ My mother, the owner of this farm said. She pointed toward the direction of the stable.

ā€œIā€™ll go checkā€ I uttered to my mother, and then I ran to the stable. The stable was mostly fine except for the horses, they have went wild and I has no idea why. Itā€™s strange, the horses were usually quiet and chill.

ā€œHow troubling, Iā€™m certain they wouldnā€™t stop unless I do somethingā€ I went to the storage and equipped my whip, the horses bellowed as I fiercely hit them with it. Soon theyā€™ve gone quiet, and I hope they stay quiet. After Iā€™m done with the job, I saw my mother gesturing for me to go back.

ā€œHey, did you find out why theyā€™ve been making the noises?ā€ My mother asked me as she no longer hears the voices of the horses.

ā€œNo mother, but I made them quietā€ I told her what I did, and that the horses were unwilling to stay quiet.

ā€œI heard rumors that some animals can sense the storm coming, how about you go check the weather broadcast while I go for a walk?ā€ My mother ordered me as she left the barn.

ā€œMother, thereā€™s no need to do so, itā€™s just rumorsā€ I tried to persuade her as Iā€™m not familiar with the technology stuffs and I donā€™t like dealing with them. But a horse abruptly interrupted our conversation and darted around the place, we stared at the direction of the stable and what we saw baffled us. A storm, a big one, one big enough to destroy the whole place. We instantly ride on the back of the horse and left without our valuables. I still do regret not listening to my mother, perhaps if I do so, we couldā€™ve bring a few valuables with us.