Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a cozy, small-town café during a rainy afternoon.

Focus on using language and structures that build an atmosphere.

Writings

The Snoring Beagle Cafe

The small college town was very simple. Only the local gas station, a small IGA , and the locally owned cafe, used book exchange and favorite hangout for all, The Snoring Beagle Cafe. Daisy ran the bakery in the cafe, baking homemade cinnamon rolls and bread, as well as seasonal cakes and cupcakes. Her sister Anne ran the cafe, serving freshly brewed coffee and tea, and the daily assortment of freshly sliced deli meats and sides. Perhaps the best trait of the cafe was the mascot, a swayback pop belly Beagle named Nash. His snoring couldn't be ignored, but with the hum of voices and the pop of the large woodburning fireplace, no one minded. Seating in the cafe was close enough together that you could talk with your bestie or a group, but sit alone and read or listen to your own music with your ear buds. Located in the mountain town of Montague, the weather was usually cool and dry in the summer and cold and wet in the winter. On a rainy afternoon, every oversized chair and ottoman were filled with students and locals, sipping a warm beverage and warming by the fire. Nash would make his rounds to receive a scratch on his head or belly, then settle in his favorite spot by the stone hearth and began to snore. The tin roof made the most of the rain and the sound could lull you to sleep. Some read, some talked or listened to music, and some wrote their own stories. When evening arrived and the twinkling lights on the cafe front came on, people would stretch and began packing up their goods to return to campus of home. Some would order a to go order for their supper, others would make plans to meet at the cafe the next day and leave with a smile on their face, knowing they would return to this safe haven soon.

A Rainy Day At The Cafe

Kate wiped down the countertop for what felt like the hundredth time that day. It wasn’t like the small cafe was empty; quite the opposite in fact. On days like this, customers would come in, order maybe one thing, and then linger to do work on their laptops to the sound of gentle raindrops hitting the roof. The sound was quite nice, and Kate wished she could grab her laptop and finish her homework. Unfortunately, despite how few orders were coming in, her manager forbade using personal devices while there were customers in the building.

And so she waited, but it wasn’t all bad. Customers came and went; the smell of freshly brewed coffee filling the space every time someone ordered; the taps of umbrellas against doorframe to dry them; the squeaks of the wet shoes of customers who neglected the door mat. Some of Kate’s friends from Uni came to say hi, and her girlfriend Jane came to visit and bring her some lunch. Kate and Jane sat quietly as they ate together, listening to the peaceful noises of the rain. Jane couldn’t stay forever, and she soon left with a kiss from Kate. With almost comedic timing, the rain picked up strength the moment Jane stepped outside. With a giggle, Kate returned to her station and wiped the counter down for the four-hundredth time.

Finally it was closing time. The last customer left with a smile and a wave, and Kate locked the door. The tables were cleaned and the chairs were placed on top of them. She took one last look at the cafe for the day and, for good measure, wiped the counter down for the six-hundredth time. The lights were turned off, the door alarm was armed, and she took off home. She practically skipped down the street, jumping in every puddle she saw with a big smile plastered to her face. It was a long and boring shift, and she was relieved it was over, but she was happy she got to enjoy a rainy day at the cafe.

Warmth

A bell tinkles overhead as she flung the door open, blissfully escaping the deluge at last. The rain continued to beat against the tall windows, as if to curse her for escaping its clutches.

The room smelled warmly of roasted beans and the faint smell of old paperback novels, due to the large bookshelves taking up much of the back wall.

Carefully, she divulged herself of her rain jacket and umbrella, hanging them besides the door on an old, worn coat rack, that seemed to be getting a lot of business today.

“Hello,” the barista said warmly, her youthful face pleasant and kind. “What can I get for you? Something to warm you up from that rain?”

“Cafe au lait, please.” Digging around her bag for loose change, she looks around the rest of the cafe, drinking in the familiar sight. Large, overstuffed chairs were clustered around low tables by the windows, full of patrons extending their stay, not eager to emerge once more into the storm. The long butcher block tables in the center were occupied with a mixture of students focused on the novels or laptops before them, some young children exuberantly playing a board game, and a group of elderly women splitting a slice of pound cake.

“Cafe au lait, up.”

thanking the young woman and grabbing her drink, she heads towards the favorite worn chair in the corner. Back to the book shelves, it gave the perfect vantage point of the rest of the shop. From here, she could easily observe the other patrons and those passing by on the street in peace.

This seat had provided years of inspiration for her stories, characters stemming from an odd fashion choice here, an over zealous motion there. If the staff at the cafe had any issues with the prolonged stays, they never said so.

It had, of course, also led to a mild caffeine addiction, but what can you do. There were worse vices.

Pleasantly defrosted by now, she took a minute to breathe in the rich nutty aroma of the cafes house dark roast. It was hard not to smile at the warm, familiar comfort, as she opens her laptop and settles in, reviewing the writing prompt of the day.

“Describe a cozy, small town cafe on a rainy afternoon.”

Smiling slightly to herself, she begins to write.