Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a description of a fireworks show as though observing it from above.

What is emphasised from the sky, and what goes unnoticed?

Writings

The Pretty Twinkling Lights

“Ooh, look at these ones, Nicole!” cried Jackson. “They’re brilliant!”

Indeed they were. From the top storey of her mansion in the clouds, Nicole the cloud-dweller could see brilliant arrays of colours lighting up the sky. Every year on the Fourth of July, though she didn’t know why. She’d marked a circle around the numbers on the page the minute Jackson had returned after one of his clandestine flights to Earth. He’d always bring along a ‘clalendrar’, because he claimed that down on terra firma, the dates moved one day ahead every year. Those humans might be wondrous, fascinating creatures with all sorts of gizmos and gadgets, but they sure could act odd sometimes.

There was an explosion which jolted Nicole from her musings, and the sky was illuminated once again. Red, green, gold, pretty. The sparks fell back down to the Earth, spiralling as though playing a game. If she went over to Martha’s at seven, she could see the one that made special shapes in the sky. It was like the humans manufactured their own brand of lightning, different but as beautiful as the cloud-dwellers’ own.

“Come down to the bottom floor, Nic, it’s much more beautiful here!” Oh no. Nicole couldn’t possibly do that. She’d feel all woozy and dizzy, as she did every time she descended too low. Jackson was fearless - he practically lived on the bottom floor - but for Nicole, getting over her fear of depths was nearly impossible.

“Oh, stop acting like such a sissy and come on down, Nic! It won’t kill you!” Jackson yelled, accurately deducting the thoughts running in her head. She slowly descended, shutting her eyes tight, until she felt Jackson’s hand wrap around her wrist and tug her down to cloud level.

“Open your eyes, dummy. The whole point of coming down is to see them up close.”

Slowly, Nicole opened her eyes. Whatever terror still filled her mind suddenly disappeared. She looked around in wonder. It was just magical. She heard a faint bang. Looking down, Nicole saw something rocketing upward, higher and higher, getting larger and larger, until it exploded a few inches below their colony, dissociating into a mix of lights and sparks, so close to her that if she just leant down a bit, she could probably catch one of them.

She continued to stare at the beautiful twinkling lights, approaching her in a never-ending sequence. She liked to think she was beckoning them- they came rapid and numerous, always exploding just when she anticipated their crash. This was her favourite night of the year. When she could see each little nuance of the sky in vivid detail due to the lights. When she could see colours she did not know even existed. Sure, the smoke was pretty hard, but it was all worth it. For those pretty twinkling lights. Jackson called them ‘fireworks’, but he never knew what he was talking about anyway.

Sky Bombs

Darkness. Darkness.. Darkness… The cool evening sky seems so endless and so vast. The anticipated murmur below is all that breaks through this silence, this darkness. There is a small light, as insignificant, as minimal, as a single birthday candle on top of a cake. The murmur dies down to a brief whisper. A whisper of hushing. All that is heard is the sorrowful song of the summer grasshopper in the distance. All that is seen is the single flame of hope and expectation in the darkness. A brief sizzling sound intrudes the sweet melody of that evening song. The flame licks its way up the cords eagerly as a lover to the base. The death of the flame is brief as it enters. A take off. Faster than an angry hand of an aggressor. The vast night is penetrated deeper, deeper and deeper still. The sky opens to this foreign, yet familiar, intruder as a virgin who opens her legs willingly. A burst of light breaks through and cascades down onto the faces of the beholders in frightening shades of blood red. A loud crack, a boom, like a bullet leaving a gun explodes through the silence. A brief squeal of the next before a star of royal blue is born next. Again and again these colors change onto the faces below. Yellows, greens, violets and oranges again and again in a diligent spiral. A climax. So beautiful and luxurious display of all merging colors of the bursting sky flowers. Grins of excitement fill the ground below this chorus of delicious lights. A final shocking bang of the final rocket punches the sky before silence. All that remains is the hazy smoke, the heavy empty air and the expected cheer of the crowd for these sky bombs.