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In a world where the ocean is considered a terrifying, prohibited place, describe your character’s first experience of going in the sea.
Why do they have to, and how do they feel about it?
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Slowly, cautiously, I dipped my toe into the water. I gasped quietly at the freezing cold. I wanted to withdraw, but I pushed myself to fully step into the water. The small waves licked at my feet, and I had to suppress my giggle. I couldn't risk being heard. The punishment for even touching the ocean was unimaginably strict. Everyone said that the ocean was a dangerous place. That anyone who dared to wade too far into the ocean was never heard from again. But as I stood with the gentle waves lapping over my feet and the great ocean stretched farther than I could see, I had a hard time believing so. Slowly, I crouched over and touched the water with my hands. It was cold, but at the same time, welcoming. This rebellion against my communities' rules filled me with triumph, and I had to stop myself from laughing out loud. When I looked up, I realized that the sun was slowly setting into the horizon, and that if I didn't get home soon, my mother would ground me for as long as I lived. I shook the water off my hands and stepped out of the water, a bit reluctantly. To my shock, when I stepped onto the sand, it stuck to my feet in wet clumps. I shook my foot and began to panic when the sand wouldn't come off. There couldn't be any evidence that I disobeyed the ruled. I shuffled over to where I left my shoes and socks and used my sock to dust off the sand. To my relief, the sand came off. I slipped my socks and shoes on and broke into a sprint. When I finally arrived at our small, cozy cottage, I was breathless, panting hard. Strands of my long blonde hair had slipped loose from my ponytail. I stepped inside, treading quietly, trying not to draw attention. My feet were still wet, and I needed to dry them privately. Just as I was about to slip into the bathroom, my little brother, Owen, popped up from around the corner. "Olivia?" he asked, "what happened to you?" "Um, just got caught up hanging out with my friends," I said. And I slipped into the bathroom and shut the door without another word. Once I had gotten my feet dried off, I went to the living room just in time for me to catch my father telling Owen yet another story of the horrors of the ocean. Owen's eyes were wide with fear, and he clutched his teddy bear tightly, practically chocking it. "Some people even say," my father said, "that if you touch the ocean, it can melt your flesh off." Owen gasped with horror, and I had to resist the urge to laugh at the absurdity of this. I bit my lip to stop myself from correcting my father. I thought about the way the water lapped at my feet, and the way the ocean never seemed to end. I wondered why we weren't allowed to experience the feeling of the cold waves washing over our feet. The ocean was so wonderful. It couldn't be harmful. Could it?
I always liked the ocean Didnt see the reason to run and hide as if to be sentenced to treason I liked the way the waves crashes Sounding like a firm high five I liked the water splashing around my feet Swarming like a bee hive I always liked the ocean the gentle salty mist The tickles on my toes and the unrelenting bliss I didn’t see why it was bashed I always liked the ocean the peace and quiet yet it was all but silent I always liked the ocean But no one else seems to feel the same The ocean like an emotional train I like the ocean and so should you There is nothing to be afraid of In this Vast expanse of blue
The first thing I noticed was the frothy foam, it took a while before I allowed it to gently caress my feet. I guess this is what initially reassured me that it was going to be fine, that, really, this creature was friendly, after all. It was at that point that I noticed it was beckoning me. I could feel my fear seeping into the effervescent water as it left my body. Was it wrong? Was it reckless to feel so strongly about something I was told before I could understand a single word was our sworn enemy? I welcomed its embrace and a sense of shame overwhelmed me: I was betraying something, someone, everyone. But there was no going back now, and I let it envelope me, as I gradually disappeared into its wet embrace. And I let it hold me and carry me. I felt so light, and so free. Was this the feeling that they wanted to prevent me from experiencing? Or were they themselves afraid of it, rather preferring a life of strict rules and stability? But it was in that moment that I realised I could clearly distinguish between truths and beliefs, and that I felt like I was shedding all of my beliefs. They were floundering in the muddy floor that was quickly getting farther and farther away from the tip of my toes. There was no going back now, I couldn't look at myself in the same way, and I could not longer take them seriously. Conversely, I had to go back and confront them. I had to show them that there was so much more to life than what's in your head alone. But the ocean was pulling me in, farther and farther from shore, and hard as I tried to kick back and change course, soon enough I was a dark dot in the endless blueness. Looking back, this must have been the most liberating experience of my life: I knew that from the deep, a force was guiding me to my next destination, and that all I had to do was to let go. And so I did.
It is said by the elders that when the wind blows, somewhere in the world someone will die soon. And the wind was blowing hard as Devon stood on a cliff, overlooking the sea crashing against the cliff.
Fortunately for him, Devon did not believe in omens.
“So you’re doing it, then.” Behind him, Devon’s friend Cat sat on a boulder, watching his best friend prepare for his plunge.
“Yes.”
“You realize you’re basically committing suicide? No one’s ever surfaced from the depths. They say the water kills you.”
“Rubbish. I’ve drank water before and when I’m in the shower, nothing happens. Water keeps up alive, dude. I’ll be the first to live, because everyone else died of fear. I am not afraid.”
“Only someone who is ignorant to their position or is overly optimistic of themselves would not be afraid in this situation,” murmured Cat. But there was no swaying Devon. Once that kid had made his mind up, he wouldn’t stop… even if his friend said all who tried had never seen victory.
Devon prepared to jump. Cat looked away. Devon leaped over the edge.
Devon fell through the air and hit the water. He sank down, smiling as bubbles erupted from his mouth. He tried to breath, but it felt like the water was… not breathable. _No, _he thought. _No no no. _He tried to get back up to the surface but the depths pulled him down. He vanished into the dark, writhing as he went. He saw the surface shimmering so far away. He struggled. Darkness clouded his eyes. He felt relaxed suddenly. He stopped trying. It really was peaceful, he supposed. He went limp and all went black as he sank to join the other skeletons.
High up above, Cat realized his friend was gone. Overtaken with grief, he slumped on the grass. He recalled his words from earlier. _“Suicide…”_
_ _The wind blew. Cat jumped. He vanished into the depths.
It was like being consumed, slowly. One foot in, and then a full leg. Water soaked through her jeans, clinging to her skin and weighing her down. Her gaze reflected the rhythm of the waves. If anyone were to see her, she would have been in the deepest depths of trouble. Oceans were sacred, feared places. They carried many lost lives, and were responsible for many.
These bodies were unholy, used to dump garbage and any secret you didn’t want others to know. Floating glass bottles with notes inside, containing words of resentment or love. Before her mother passed, she had grabbed her hand and told her not to run from the things others did. To not be like everyone else.
Cora had ignored it then, but the more she looked at the vast blue of a curious world, diverse and untouched, but also plagued by the carelessness of man, the more she felt a certain pull towards it. She hadn’t expected it to be like this, though. Her mother used to swim. It hadn’t been illegal yet. Nobody even talked about why the law was passed in the first place—the law prohibiting people from touching any body of water. Maybe this wold help her understand exactly that.
So that was what Cora was doing. She wasn’t diving head first, but she would sink as far as she could to discover the truth. Because what if it lied within the very place she wasn’t meant to be?
Her breath hitched at the icy waters. It was like a blanket of cold, clutching at her chest and swallowing her up. she forced herself to breathe, deeply. The girl had to remain in control of herself. She was still near to the leg of the dock post, holding on for dear life. Biting her lip, she pushed herself down so the waters kissed her chin. Her lip quivered, and she closed her eyes, willing the numbness to go away.
It was late in the night. There was hardly a chance she would be caught, but she still looked around from time to time, ready to quickly disappear under the dock if anyone came. Suddenly, the distant sounds of partying and music rung close by. Flashing lights of all colors uncut throgh a dark sky alight with stars.
Cora had thought her classmates were only joking when they said they’d hold the most epic party ever after curfew. They weren’t. That was alright. People stayed far from the docks, anyways. As long as she was careful, there shoudn’t be any problems.
She had to make this quick. But something about the movement of the ocean calmed her. It was cold, but it made her feel warm. The way the steady waves brushed against her skin and flowed around her. The chill of the waters gave her goose flesh but the feel of it…it made her feel more alive. Just as she was beginning to climb further down the wooden leg, the cold now reaching up to her lips, she heard voices. They laughed and poked fun at one another.
She knew them well, and if she didn’t hide she’d be caught. But her hand slipped momentarily, and she screamed, before grabbing hold again.
The laughter stopped. This wasn’t good. If these people were really who she thought they were, then they would freak if they saw her like this. But she knew it was over when she heard one of them speak.
“Hey, do you see that?”
This was a horrible idea. Why did they have to be here the same day as her? She didn’t even think they liked partying. We’re they even going to tell her they were going, invite her along? Cora slipped again. Her hand squeaked against the dampened wood. She bit her palm in pain.
“Shit, there’s a person down there!” Her friend responded. The two of them began running towards her.
No! __ __ “Its me—Stop!” She tried, but it was too late. Cal flung his coat to the ground and jumped into the freezing waters. Her other friend, Robin, grabbed his coat and shrieked, seeing Cora. He made his way over to her and reached out.
“Grab my hand!”
She couldn’t leave now, not when she was so close to the reason she came in the first place.
“I’m fine, Cal!” But he swam to her and pried her from the pole, anyways, paying no mind to her resistance.
“Let go,” she told him. He pulled her closer, her head going under for a second. The girl choked.
Her friend never listened. He pushed her up onto the dock before she could even argue. Shortly after, he joined her.
Cora’s white tank hugged around her tightly, sopping. Hair stuck to her forehead. She coughed up the water that had entered her lungs while Cal rubbed her back and kept asking if she was okay, what she had been thinking.
Robin ran over to them and wrapped the coat around Cora’s shoulders as she shivered, but she threw it off herself. Robin stood back and stared at the two of them, concerned and worried.“Why would you do that?”
“You were going to drown!”
“I was fine, and you knew it!” Cora was fully capable of taking care of herself. She didn’t need anyone to do that for her. She neither wanted, nor needed protection.
“No, you weren’t! You could have died.”
“So could you, you dumbass,” she yelled. “You could’ve killed us both.” How could he have done such a thing? She was about to finally understand what her mother saw in the waters, what she felt. She wanted to feel the freedom her mother did, the kind she always talked about and lived for. Why was it that every single time she made up her mind for once, something always happened to pull her away? It wasn’t fair, and as far as she was concerned, the waters had been completely safe. Different, but nothing worse than cold.
Then a thought came to mind. Cal had rescued her, but…he didn’t know how to swim. Nobody did. But he was swimming. And he certainly looked familiar with it.
Cora stood, her hair sopping wet, the breeze adding a new chill to her bones. “You—you lied to me!” For a moment, he didn’t understand what she was talking about, but then it hit him.
“I can explain…”
“You’re ridiculous!” She threw her arms out. “For all that talk of wanting to leave—move to a place where we would be allowed to swim and go to beaches, feel sand under our feet. You’ve been doing it this whole time and never told me _once, _haven’t you?”
He didn’t respond.
Her vision clouded as tears threatened to spill over. She began to walk away, intending to go home.
“Cora, please, we can explain…”
She paused. _“We?” _There was no more threatening then. Tears spilled down the sides of her face at their own accord, even though she hoped with every inch of her being she’d misheard.
The more she waited for a response, the longer Robin stayed still and silent. Cora’s head shook in disbelief as she turned to leave.
Robin opened her mouth and closed it. Cal bounded passed her after Cora. He tried to grab her wrist but she yanked her hand back. “You _knew _how much this meant to me—my mother…” she couldn’t even find the right words. “Don’t follow me.” A part of her that she hid, hoped they would.
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Her friends watched her slowly disappear. “Cora, wait—” Robin bumped into Cal’s arm. He was blocking her from chasing after.
“She won’t listen right now,” he said. “Just give her space.”
“I warned you something like this could happen,” Robin stated. “She’ll never speak to us again.”
“She will, trust me.”
“How do you know?”
He took his coat from the floor and flung it over his shoulder. “Because she’ll want answers.”
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(Part 2?)
The ocean is full of creatures of all kinds. The water is just as deadly especially if you don’t know how to swim. It goes on for miles and miles without end. Slithering, slimy, vicious, and sharp tooth good swimming creatures. Absolutely terrifying. I was only walking by the shore looking for something nice to take home when I decided to dip my feet in the water. It was freezing but quite nice. It’s safe from the edge hopefully.
All my life the ocean has been forbidden. I remember the first time I felt this overwhelming desire to step in but then was snatched up by my grandmother. She frantically screamed at me and told me the ocean is dangerous. It’s no place for anyone who wants to live. I had no idea what she meant. I was only 3. I asked her why but I didn’t get an answer. In fact, no one really gave me an explanation till I was about 12.
I had been looking out the bay window at the dark waters as they rushed and crashed against the jagged rocks. My grandmother was lying on the couch half asleep. The rain was starting to come down softly at first, and then picking up within minutes.
Why is the ocean so dangerous grandma? Why does no one ever try to explore it? We explore space! We explore other planets! Why not our own ocean?
It’s dangerous.
What makes it so dangerous?
It started with space exploration. I don’t know the details, but ever since we found out how we were able to explore the stars, the waters became off limits. People who enter the ocean disappear and are never seen again. Anyone who enters can never leave. No one knows why.
I saw a tear go down grandmas face.
Is that what happened to my mother?
Grandma turned to face the back of the couch and I knew this conversation was over.
I didn’t know hardly any details, but I do know this, shortly after my mother had me, she went into the forbidden waters for some reason and was never seen again. Every family has at least one member who entered and was never seen again. You’d think with this track record, no one would dare enter but somehow the sea calls to them…. To us. To me.
I had to know the secret. Even if it meant I would never live to share my discoveries. My opportunity would soon present itself.
Shara!
I was up in my room but could hear the screams of my grandmother so loud it felt lil it was in my very ear! I ran to the kitchen to see blood on the counter and blood dripping from her hand. She had cut herself while making dinner. I didn’t waste any time. I called for help. I wrapped her hand as tight as I could, trying to ignore the feel of her finger barely hanging on. Surgery lasted hours and the hospital stay would last days. I would have to keep an eye on the Victorian mansion, alone, and unsupervised. I saw the fear in my grandmothers eyes. Somehow she knew the temptation in my 16 year old heart. She knew none of the stories scared me but only fascinated me. Her eyes pleaded a promise from me but I merely shook my head and assured her every thing would be alright.
I meant to stay away. I really did. But the moon was full. There was no one around. The sea was cam as glass. I sat on the wrap around porch steps staining. It was nearly silent. A slight breeze picked up and I saw the trees bend toward the waters. It was as if something else had lifted me. I made sure no one was watching as I approached the rocks. What if I just touched the waters?
I strained my hand to reach. I had to stretch further. My dark hair fell into my face almost causing me to plunge face first in tre waters! I caught myself… but my hands touched the water.
Nothing. Nothing happened. I waited 3 days while my grandmother was mending in the hospital. Would my hand because diseased and fall off? Would I get sick and die?
Nothing. My grandmother returned home and nothing happened. Have we all been lied to? If so, why did so many people disappeared?
My grandmother was relaxing on the couch again. Another storm was approaching. The sea looked so angry. No… sad…. Like it was lonely or something. Then I heard it. A song? Like a flute sound from a shell? I turned to my grandmother to see if she heard it. She just lay there, eyes starting to close. As she fell asleep, the song grew louder. I stepped out onto the porch. It was beautiful. It was the most beautiful song I had ever heard in my life! It’s like the wind and rain were part of a heavenly orchestra expressing something beyond my comprehension. I wanted to hear more!
The storm passed and along with it the song. Life seemed to go on normally. For a while. But then music that no one else seemed to hear kept playing. The more intently I listened, the closer to the waters I mindlessly walked. I was hypnotized!
Shara! My grandmother screamed over and over but I hardly heard her. She got right up in my face, standing between myself and the rocks. The song was louder than her screams…. Only her shaking me released me from my trance.
What’s happening Shara? You know you can’t go in the waters! No one can!
The music… it’s pulling me in.
My grandmother seemed to understand all at once. She tried to pull me to the house. Her hands burning my skin with her tug of war. It was no use. Nothing could stop me from entering the waters. I nearly dragged her in as well! And what I saw….
Was a galaxy with billions of stars. I swam deeper and could see planets and solar systems… a whole universe I could explore! I never looked back!
I’m not sure why I’d always been intrigued by the ocean. Maybe it was because it was forbidden. After all, ever since I was little Mama always said, “even one toe in the ocean means certain death, you hear me? You best stay far away.” And I did, at least for a while. But the ocean kept calling, beckoning me closer. The smell of salt carrying through a cracked window, a gust of unusually strong wind ruffling my hair; the sea was practically begging me to return. When I could no longer resist, I made my way between the dunes to the beach below. I was alone out there, of course- no one was crazy enough to go to the beach anymore. I untied my sneakers and kicked them off - I wanted to feel the sand between my bare toes. I stood there for hours, staring out at the water. How could something so beautiful, so vast and alive and unending be bad? Sure, the ocean was powerful. But that was just nature - you respect it, it tolerates you.
I spent the next few weeks doing just this - standing barefoot in the sand, watching the waves. Only after a while did I gain enough courage to make my way down to the water. I started with one toe, of course, and once Mama’s theory was disproven, I went in to my ankles. The water was colder than I’d anticipated, but I adjusted after a bit. Every day I went a little bit further, until just my head hovered above the surface. Then I went under, and for a moment the whole world was quiet.
I know I’m supposed to follow these rules for reasons I done understand. I’m starting to think the rulers have these rules in place only to control are every move. It’s been two years since I saw my brother, I’m starting to think he made it off this island. I must know if he is ok what if he’s out there. When night falls, I’m going to the forbidden just close enough to check it out, see for myself. As Harley slowly and quietly makes her way to the oceanside, she starts to sweat from the palms of her hands. Wiping them every few steps, her breathing begins to speed up as heart feels like it’s going to beat right out her chest. She stops to gather herself taking deep breaths in and out as slowly as she can manage to do so. Harley takes a drink of her water, looking in the direction she came debating if she should return to camp. She then turns and looks toward the ocean takes one last deep breath collects her pride and pushes on. Harley makes it to the peer, the guards have the ocean heavily surrounded, armed with guns. She waits it out, staying low to the ground peeking only every few minutes. Finally, it looks like all the guards have passed out from cheap booze. She Slowly walks towards them stopping here and there from the sounds of paused snoring. When she makes it to the sand, she approaches the sand she bends down and first smells it, trying to see if she smells chemicals. She then takes her hand and quickly touches the sand drawing her hand back as fast as she can, nothing happens. Harley then steps proudly on the sand, with her eyes closed, she opens them in shock she is still alive. She then runs to the water where there are 5 small vehicles sitting on the water. She goes to them one by one, when she got to the last one, she gets in, grabs the sticks and strolls the ocean on a voyage to find her bother.
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