Writing Prompt

STORY STARTER

In a heart-shaped box, a mother keeps her children’s teeth...

Use this as the opening line to a story or poem, and decide whether this narrative will have a sweet or harrowing tone.

Writings

Teeth Collector

The mother peers into Jonathon’s mouth, seeing that his two front teeth are wiggly. “It’s about time!” She yells. “Those look pretty loose, they’ll probably come out in a couple days.” Jonathon smiles at her with half his teeth growing in, almost looking like little white specks protruding out from his gums. The mothers other son Nathan who is 2 years older walks in, holding up one of his molars. The mother smiles and she takes the tooth. “I’ll give this to the tooth fairy Nathan,” she says, putting the tooth into her pocket. “That’s my last tooth I think,” Nathan whispers, twiddling his thumbs. “What?!” His mother burst out. “You can’t be out of teeth, your not that old. Before you know it I’ll be pulling your wisdom teeth out!” “I thought you said the doctors were doing that?” Nathan asked. “If the doctors can do it, I can do it just as good,” the mother said smiling. Nathan walked away and started to watch on his iPad. “What are wisdom teeth?” Johnathon asked curiously. “It’s just extra teeth you don’t need,” she replied. “If you didn’t need them then you wouldn’t get them,” Jonathan replied. “But no one’s mouth is big enough for them,, that’s why we do it.” Jonathan walks away to resume playing games with his brother. The mother slipped into her room, and from in a small cabinet with a lock on it, she pulled out her heart shaped box. It was decorated with a red ribbon wrapping around it and decorated with photos of her kids teeth. She smiled and began to take the molar out from her pocket. It was still damp and moist, and some blood had stained its way onto the tooth. She gently sniffed the tooth and put it down. She opened the box, pulling the ribbon off of the box. Inside the box was a layer of styrofoam and soft cotton. Each tooth had its own compartment, she gently placed the molar inside the box. She had organized each out of the 18 teeth in order from oldest to youngest. The oldest teeth were browning and had dark patches of color scattered around its skin. The new youngest tooth fit right in with the others and she closed the box. She proceeded to wrap the ribbon around the box again, the same way she always did it. She smiled and smelled the box. She didn’t care if some teeth were rotting away, they were still valuable to her. She placed the box back inside the small cupboard, closing the door and then locking the lock back up. It looked as if nothing had been touched. She planned to tell Nathan when he had all his teeth out including the wisdom teeth. Most families do the tooth fairy, but this one collects teeth. The mother opens another small box, with one singular tooth. It was the fathers tooth that had been accidentally knocked off when he died of cancer. She always kept it with her, and that’s why she collected teeth, to remind her that her husband is still with her…always.

To Remember You

In a heart-shaped box, my mother kept my baby teeth. It was something she had done to my older brother, sister, and myself. I was now looking at it, slightly disgusted and debating on if I should throw it out. But first...

I took a deep breath.

There were a ton of boxes. "Ugh," I sighed, to nobody. All these boxes were to head downstairs, with no elevator, into a small, compact car. I would have to make a few trips. It might be quicker if I trashed the boxes and their belongings and started from scratch.

"Do you need any help," a voice said from my doorway. I looked up. It was my mother. Her frail frame fit fully in the space the door provided, even if it was only a little bit open. "What's that you have in your hand?"

I felt bad for my mom. After I moved out, she would have nobody. My dad died seven years earlier - my brother moved out that same year, off to college, just like I was now. My sister met some guy on the internet and moved away when she turned 18. She barely kept in touch, but I didn't blame her. It came to light only a few years earlier, the year she moved out, that dad was abusing her. It really messed my mom up. I had no idea if my mom knew of the abuse or not, but she changed ever since the truth was revealed.

"Oh, uh, it's the teeth box," I said, ashamed that I was about to throw it away. "I found it with my stuff."

"Oh, my," she whispered, taking it from me. "This is my most valued possession. No matter where you kids go, I'll always have a piece of you with me."

I looked away, feeling bad that I was moving out. Leaving her here alone like this was pulling at my heartstrings. "Are you going to be okay here, by yourself?"

She looked up, tears forming in her eyes. "Don't leave. I don't -"

"I meant, do you want to...you know, go into a retirement home?" I felt instantly bad as soon as the words left my mouth. "The only reason I say that is because this house is old, and -"

"And I'm old, too?"

"..." Damn, I really messed up this time. Stupid me with my stupid words.

"I won't be lonely; I'll always have a piece of you with me."

I looked at the teeth box. It was turned upside down; she had spilled the teeth onto the floor.

"Mom?"

"Time to start a new collection."

She reached into my mouth and yanked. Blood spilled as I felt numerous teeth come loose from the gums.