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Someone who has grown up in a hot country experiences winter for the first time.

Some people have never known cold weather; try to get into the mindset of a character having their first winter experience!

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Who on earth would want to spend there winter holidays in Scotland. It’s not even a winter wonderland like mum promised, its just slush and fog. I knew it was going to be cold but nobody warned be it would be below negative freezing. If someone had I would have packed and actually coat instead of just cropped jumpers. I was fine with staying in the Canary Islands, you know, where I actually live. That’s what we’ve always done for Christmas, me and my friends are always together. Also it’s the only time of year I’m aloud to see dad, besides my birthday. Mum said it’s because my great aunt Shelly is getting old and is probably gonna kick the bucket soon, so we should spend the holidays with her because it might be her last. Which doesn’t make sense because I didn’t even know I had a great aunt Shelly until two weeks before we left. I think mum’s just using her as an excuse because she doesn’t want me spending anymore time with dad. “I have custody over you, not him!” She tells me, for the hundredth time. It’s not like I’m asking her to hand over custody I just want to spend time with him. But no we have to fly to what feels like the other side of the world and freeze our bugs off in Scotland. I was promised snow, I was promised chestnuts roasting on an open fire, I was promised bagpipes (whatever those are). Instead what I’m given is a pull out sofa and blocked roads so we can’t even go Christmas shopping. And this great aunt Shelly lady doesn’t look anything like me or mum, she could be for dads side but mum has vowed to never speak to anyone from the side of the family again. I’m like 80% sure she’s an actress mum hired to play a part just so she could have a reason to leave home for the holidays. I don’t want to be here, I want to be in the sun and lying in the sand not huddled underneath a mountain of blankets. I want my dad I want my friends I don’t want scarfs and burst pipes. The only upside of being here is Edinburgh, apparently the Christmas market is suppose to be amazing, but the roads are ice so we can’t drive down. I tried to call dad to tell him I won’t be there for the holiday but I just got his voicemail. I’m terrified that he’ll be sitting at the dining table waiting for me to knock on the door and sit down for dinner with him. Outside in the warm air surrounded by the native mosquitoes instead of freezing my tits off in a strangers house. Christmas is supposed to be about family and being together but I’m not even in the same country as most of them. Christmas this year is really gonna suck.
Jeanna’s chest tightened thinking about leaving her warm secure cabin on the river barge to set off into a land of ice and danger. Back in Kaldura, her life was built for the hot, coastal landscape. Homes were open and airy to let the breeze in, a single story on stilts, and cooking domes outside to keep the heat away from our beds. Kaldura was paradise. But even mild Kaldurian winters could be utterly miserable. How on earth could people live with a true Lioran winter? From what she’d read, your extremities could blacken and fall off from frostbite and you could die from being out in the cold. Living like that just didn’t seem natural. A knock on the door startled her out of her musings. “Everything a’ite in there Miss? We’re here”. She opened the door to a blast of bitter cold, finding the second mate with a large bundle tucked under one arm. He shoved the bundle into her arms “here’s your kit Miss, cap’n sorted it all at the last stop as requested. Should keep your toes all in one place”, he grunted and closed the door in her face again. “Thanks” she muttered to the door. Wrestling with the complicated layers of new gear, she finally stood sweating and ready to go, facing the door once more. Time to leave. Reminding herself what was at stake, she squared her shoulders, stepped out and walked up the steps, bracing herself for the biting misery. …. …The sky was sparkling. The river, smooth as glass, had crystals lining the banks and trees and hills in the distance were topped with white. The deck had a light dusting of snowfall. Tilting her head back the soft little bursts of cold landed on her cheeks and eyelashes. Still snug in her furs, the cold air and snow flakes on her exposed face was rejuvenating. Wow. “First time in Liora then?” the captain chuckled. She nodded mutely, still staring at the white world around her. He spared a grin and a comforting squeeze to her shoulder, then walked off to continue roaring directions to his men. She’d heard of snow of course, and Jeanna had come prepared. She’d read and all about the dangers of exposure and how to stay safe. Her Keeka told her repeatedly it was a daily grind just to live and travel with the stuff, and how lucky she was to live in a land of summer. She had all the books she could get her hands on about avoiding frostbite and exposure. “No-one mentioned it was keelin’ magical.” she murmured to herself. “Ah… Miss…are ya ready? We’ve sent your bags on ahead”. “Oh yes thanks!” Jeanna replied, snapping back to reality. She was as ready as she could be. Time to go save her baby brother.