Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Enabling. Generous. Sparse.

Create a character, inspired by these three words, in a short scene which captures their qualities.

Writings

Darryl

“I just don’t understand what this has to do with me,” Tina said grumbled in her mother’s general direction. Both of them avoided eye contact.

“Your cousin texted me – you know how hard it is for him to reach out to people – and specifically asked if you would be there,” Tina’s mom replied, as if she was explaining this to her daughter for the first time.

Tina’s cousin Darryl hasn’t mentioned a friend to his parents, let alone spent time with one outside of school, since he started 6th grade. He and Tina went to the same junior high, but she was in 8th grade – which might as well have been college in the eyes of 11 year olds. Darryl enjoyed music with no lyrics, couldn’t stand sports or video games, and spent his Saturdays reading about obscure wars on Wikipedia. In other words, kids his age did not find him relatable.

He wanted to go watch the 8th grade Spring orchestra concert, but he didn’t want to sit alone. While he could get away with walking alone in class and only speaking when a teacher called on him, Darryl knew that attending an event alone would confirm everyone’s assumption that he had no friends.

“First, orchestra is lame. Two, I wanna go hang out with Maggie tonight,” Tina groaned through her rainbow braces. Her mother didn’t like picking unnecessary fights. Over the last year or so, Tina went from seeing her mother as her best friend to a mosquito that won’t stop buzzing in her ear. Not that her mother spoke much. But she often lingered, waiting for Tina to say something to her.

“Fine,” her mother said. “Maybe next time.”

A Concrete Paperweight

The long, meandering queue stretches beyond them like the River Nile. She can feel Eva’s quick, small slippery palm escaping from her own prying, desperate grasp. Her own fingers clutch, but falter. It’s too late. The echoing moment of calm that has passed between them only seconds ago, shatters.

“Mummy!” Eva’s voice rings out like an alarm bell and Kara’s heart falters, squeezes with that familiar tightness.

Kara looks down at her. Eva’s cheeks redden to her trademark shade of crimson. No, no, no. Not now. Her tiny hands curl into fists.

“Why are we waiting here?” Her bundle of joy bellows.

Kara feels another part of her soul take flight. Yet, somehow she’s heavier still. A concrete paperweight. Pushing the towering trolly away from them, she kneels, her face burning, feeling a sea of eyes on her. The rhythmic beep of the scanner and impatient sighs of shoppers resonate around them.

“What is it, love?” She wonders aloud what it could possibly, possibly be this time. In a world as small as Eva’s there seems to be an awful lot of obstacles. Kara studies her swollen, bloated daughter, squashed into her precious fuchsia tutu, her chubby cheeks wobbling as her mouth turns down further and further.

“I’m hungry!” She wails, and tears, somehow, miraculously, spring from her sapphire eyes.

Again? “Okay, can you please wait until we get home?” Kara pleads, her trembling knees aching for her to rise again.

“I said - I’m hungry! I want chocolate - now!” Eva’s determined gaze glints with a dangerous fury.

Kara’s heart gives another painful squeeze, feels her daughter’s unhappiness shrouding her, suffocating her.

She rises, as does the pitch of Eva’s frantic cries.

Her pale, quaking fingers fumble through the own brand items and finally she locates the magic packet.

Within moments, her cries are silenced.

She grins and bears the accusatory eyes of the checkout assistant as he scans the oddly light, empty packet, and leaves it for her to pack away on the other side of the conveyer belt.

On the way home, Kara erases the painfully recent memories of cards being declined, of dividing payments between them, praying they would not let her down again.

When they reach home, Eva begs Kara to play dollhouses with her, and despite the growing number of missed calls on her phone, emails piling up in the inbox titled “Urgent,” she agrees.

After she puts the shopping away, she goes to the bathroom and studies herself briefly in the mirror. Her face is lined, drawn, haggard, like a thousand sorrowful nights have passed by and she’s endured every single one. Her cheekbones slice through her skin, collar bones rising high like a barrier.

“Mummy!” Eva demands, impatience dripping off her tongue.

“Coming!” She replies, taking one last look at the ghost of the woman she once knew.

Edmund's Party.

Edmund was a shortish, brainy-ish, happy sort of chap. Friendly and immensely gregarious, he was slightly overweight, somewhat out of breath, bespectacled and secretly balding. In a side wind his head resembled a sparsely feathered sparrow chick hiding under a ski jump.

Edmund did like to organise a party. His favourite venue was his generously proportioned back garden and he invariably spared no expense when laying on the party treats. On this particular June Saturday there were two barbecues, a ten piece band playing bluegrass music, a dance floor with a mad laser light show set up. There were several bouncy castles, a temporary but large swimming pool, replete with water slides and super-soakers. There were jugglers, clowns and magicians. There was Gipsy Lil, Edmund's trusted fortune teller, professors of philosophy, investment brokers, actors, authors, musicians and artists. Three different bars supplied various cocktails, wines, spirits and beers. A sharp looking type was there to provide for other less legal chemical perquisites.

All in all, everyone from age nine weeks to ninety was having an absolutely splendid time. Edmund was delighted that he had, simply by digging into his vastly deep pockets, enabled everyone to have such a wonderful experience. He looked around propriatorially and noticed a cadaverous stranger in an infinitely black cloak and black hood who was standing stock still at the pool side. Edmund didn’t know who this stranger was, but with his usual bonhomie he made his way over to welcome him. The stranger stood silently, alone, caliginous, insubstantial and fugacious.

As Edmund approached, the stranger turned towards him. An ice cold wind blew across the garden and the sky darkened with blue-black cloud. The biting cold chilled the hooting revellers in the pool to sudden and unexpected silence. Edmund stopped in his tracks opened his mouth to speak, but as he did so the stranger pointed a long skeletal finger at him. Edmund saw the stranger’s ice blue eyes glimmer for a moment in the darkness of his ragged cavernous black hood and then melodramatically clutched at his chest and fell silently to the wet grass. He was deathly pale. Cold. Deathly. Dead. The gaunt stranger, so ominously present just a moment ago was now nowhere to be seen. The sky cleared and the sun returned to shine.

The hooting revellers in the pool resumed hooting, the bar staff continued serving drinks, sausages sizzled, bouncy castles swayed to the boisterous jumping of excited children and the bluegrass music picked up from the exact semiquaver they had paused at when the sky darkened. The professors talked to the actors, the authors talked to themselves. Jugglers juggled while the magicians freed numerous white creatures from improbable hats.

Gypsy Lil, the fortune teller knelt by Edmund. She deftly picked his pockets and then on his mobile phone she called an ambulance.

“I did try and tell you,” She said. She took a star spangled blue cloak from a passing magician and laid it over Edmund.