WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a character's internal monologue that includes an example of stream of consciousness.
Stream of consciousness is a literary technique that represents the flow of a character's thoughts and feelings as they occur in real time, without logical order or punctuation.
Dialouge
This is some dialouge and linea from my current WIP.
“I would rather fight to love than love to fight.”
“Maybe I could love you someday, sometime, in another life, but not here, not now, and not with the soul who is speaking.”
“I dont write for anyone but myself, just like some have friends, i have words, they are all that aid me in the pain of isolation.”
“I wish is just that, a wish, and mine never seem to come true.”
“The stars are my soul, they will lead you where you need to go.”
“If you see me everywhere you love me. If you see me sometimes, we love eachother. If you never see me, my very existence is irrelevant. But if you see me in your nightmares, I am your greatest fear.”
“Did you ever stop to think how this would affect me? No you didnt because you are a selfish prick.”
“I feel so lost in this world, so trapped in my own flesh, do empty in every other aspect.”
“Loving is a privilege not all are blessed with.”
“Apperently telling someone to go away, does not mean to go away!”
“Someday I will love again, this curse will break, and i will be free. Released from my shackled Oh how I hope that day will come.”
A: “I had a dream about you.”
B: “Is that a good thing?”
A:”I dont know.”
“This is my way of saying goodbye, To the past, to the curse, to the pain.”
“Its so peacful under the stars, they never judge you.”
“People say I am an old soul, i think it is just because i am stressed out, have no friends, and read too much.”
“Be seen and not heard is such bullshit. I want to be seen by the eyes of every being. I want my voice to not only ve listened to but be heard.”
“How do I get over it? How do I deal with it? I wm just a kid and people seem to forget that.”
“It is ok to cry, for sometimes that is all we can do.”
“I want to be remembered for more than just my tragedies.”
“Funny how the ocean feels so liberating yet so suffocating.”
A:”I dont know how to kill the demons inside me. But what if I am the demon? I guess you could do the deed yoursef.”
B: “What the Hell? Are you crazy? I coulf never hurt you.”
“I want to know what love feels like. I once did, and now I can’t feel anything. I want to feel something.”
“I want to love you, but my heart has long since been void of that ability.”
A: “I don’t think i am beautiful, I think I am broken.”
B: “Can’t you be both?”
A: “I don’t like the quiet.”
B: “My dear just your presence fills the silence.”
“Dont fall in love with me, because I can’t live without you.”
“What is it like to feel? To love? To know anything? For I can’t remember.”
“I am not a monster, I can love, but i choose not to for the safety of others.”
“Better to have loved than to have lost.”
“I am alone, I figure I always will be.”
“You can’t fix me, I am broken beyond repair.”
“Years ago I was normal, Now i can’t remember how to feel.”
“Astrology is the language of the stars.”
A: “Your soul is as black as my heart.”
B: “Perfect.”