WRITING OBSTACLE
Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.
How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?
Arabella
Their eyes glow hazel
Like a wart on a toad
Their face shines smiles
That make me want to hit the road
Her clothes lack effort
And her manner seems off
I wish i could hit myself with a brick
Because seeing her makes me sick
I dont like many things about her
Not her freckles her dimples or wrinkles
Her bags are so low so dark and so hollow
She musnt have slept for many tomorrows
I hate her manner
Her crystal clear tears
The way she looks at me
A rivalry and a hint of something new
I don’t like her
How she sits alone
Her thoughts to herself
What could she think
She must be a drone
I dont like her I dont
Not her ripped cargo jeans
Or her vintage bands tees
Her flannels and leather
Her shoes in any weather
She makes me feel sick
So if you dont mind
I will leave this meased up girl behind
[Ths girl the nararator or whatever is talking about is the MC in a WIP I have]