STORY STARTER

Submitted by Talon

Your significant other frantically calls you. As the call continues, you notice the person on the other end of the line sounds just like them, but the way they speak is slightly off in such a way that it brings an unsettling feeling...

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Ring-ring! Ring-ring!

Joan: Hey grill!

Laura: Hi girl! Wait, did you say _grill_?

Joan: *stutters creepily* N-n-n-noooo

Laura: Are you OK?

Joan: Yes.

Laura: Ok.

Joan: Do you want to play with me?

Laura: What’s going on with you?

Joan: Hehehe….

Laura: Joan you are going crazy.

Joan: Turn around.

Laura: Ok… *turns around* AAAHAHHAHAHHAH. *silence*

Joan: Hehehe…

Comments 10

😂

I have got to call my friends grill now!

What have I created?

Not sure but for now I am completely forgetting to call them grill 😂

Cool idea! Dialogue is a great way to introduce characters. I’d love more details revealed such as their ages and dear old friends versus new acquaintances.

Reading this was really fun. It’s cool how you made it a phone call, only using dialogue. ❤️

that definitely scared me!! wonderful!!

You’re the best