STORY STARTER
Write a story about a character who has a melody stuck in their head constantly.
Is this just the result of a catchy tune, is there something deeper going on, or is it a sign of something they don't understand yet?
Young, Dumb, Broke High School Kids
Swinging
Up
And
Down
The playground
Is
My
Home.
‘So you’re still thinking of me, just like I know you should…’
I wonder if
She’s
Thinking
Of me
The air rushing
Into my
Face
‘I cannot give you everything, you know I wish I could.’
I imagine her eyes
I want to give her
Everything,
She deserves it all.
The swing comes up
‘I’m so high at the moment,’
Then down
‘I’m so caught up in this…”
The way she smiles
She’s perfect
Wait no, she’s not actually, lemme explain
You’re not gonna believe this,
But the more flaws she has,
The more perfect she is.
The more special she is.
‘Yeah we’re just young,’
I remember meeting her
At preschool
‘Dumb’
I remember laughing with her
Singing so loud we could barely breathe
In the car
‘And broke,’
I remember shopping with her
At this candy store
We wasted a ton of money
For some chocolates.
It was worth it.
‘But we still got love to give,’
I remember hugging her tightly
I’m never going to let go again.
I promised it that day.
‘While we’re young, dumb, young, young, dumb, and broke. Young dumb, young, young, dumb, and broke…’
The words fade away as I walk home,
But one lyric
Sticks out
‘Young, dumb, broke high school kids.’
That’s us.
HAHAHA this is so relatable bc I’m in hs abd love doing this stuff
This writing is amazing and the fact that I know the song makes it ten times better
Thank you!
Oof I can’t relate to all of this. Well written. Beautiful. Makes me miss my childhood friend ☹️
Lol I meant I CAN relate
My dang thumb keeps twitching I swear I’m gonna kill it… but anyway 😅
Thank you! I understand your pain, sometimes I comment something in the middle of the night, wake up and reread it, and find a grammar mistake.
Me toooooo, I’m a dumb, broke high school kid😂