Writing Prompt

STORY STARTER

A teenager from a reclusive society is allowed on the internet for the first time, and struggles between enjoying it, and wanting to continue with his natural lifestyle.

Writings

Logging Off: Jared vs. The Internet

Jared had always lived a quiet life in the off-grid commune, nestled somewhere between the mountains and a vague sense of superiority. His family, along with the rest of the community, had chosen to live without modern conveniences. They grew their own food, made their own clothes, and spent evenings by candlelight discussing the evils of technology, capitalism, and processed foods. Jared knew the internet existed, of course—people whispered about it like it was some sort of mythical creature, like a unicorn that ate your soul. But as far as he was concerned, his life was fine without it. Sure, he missed out on the occasional pop culture reference, but when you’ve never seen a TV show, “missing out” doesn’t really feel like much of a loss.

That is, until the commune elders decided that all the teenagers should “experience the outside world” for one week. “It’ll build resilience,” they said, as if resilience meant logging on to Wi-Fi instead of chopping firewood. So, Jared found himself at a public library, sitting in front of a computer that hummed and buzzed like an alien spacecraft. The librarian, a woman who looked like she’d seen the rise and fall of every internet trend, leaned over and said, “Just click the browser icon.”

Jared hesitated, his hand hovering over the mouse like it was an explosive device. After a moment, he clicked.

The screen blinked, and suddenly he was face-to-face with the homepage of a search engine. He typed “trees” into the search bar, because why not start with what he knew? Within milliseconds, he was bombarded with thousands of results—pictures, articles, videos of people talking about trees. There was an overwhelming amount of information about something he’d spent his entire life surrounded by.

He clicked on a video, and suddenly a man appeared on the screen, standing in a park, pointing at different types of trees with the enthusiasm of someone who had never actually touched one. “This is an oak tree!” the man shouted, as if this fact were brand new. Jared stared in disbelief. He could literally see an oak tree from the window next to him, and yet here was this man, explaining it like it was some deep, ancient secret.

He tried a new search: “how to grow tomatoes.” This was something Jared had done every year with his dad, hands deep in the dirt, the smell of earth strong in the air. But the internet had its own ideas. He was hit with an onslaught of hydroponic methods, fertilizing hacks, and “tomato-growing communities” where people discussed their plants like they were delicate, high-maintenance celebrities. One video had a guy measuring his tomato leaves with a ruler and fretting about optimal sun exposure.

“Seriously?” Jared muttered, glancing out the window at the actual tomato plants thriving under the completely unregulated sunlight of the commune’s garden.

But the internet wasn’t done with him. He clicked on a sidebar out of curiosity and suddenly found himself in an online forum titled “Tomato Lovers Unite.” It was hundreds of people—some who appeared to live in actual cities, without gardens—debating tomato varieties like they were high art. Jared read a post from someone named TomatoTom, who claimed to be growing heirloom tomatoes on a Brooklyn rooftop. “If you’re not using organic fish emulsion as a fertilizer, you might as well be growing plastic,” TomatoTom had written, followed by thirty replies either applauding his wisdom or angrily defending synthetic fertilizers.

Jared blinked at the screen, confused by the intensity. He’d never seen people get this worked up over plants before. Out of habit, he reached for a snack, only to find himself holding a pre-packaged granola bar his mom had snuck into his bag. It felt wrong to eat processed food while reading about organic farming, but he unwrapped it anyway.

The hours flew by. Jared ventured into social media next, where he discovered the bizarre world of influencers. He was perplexed by people making six-figure salaries for posting videos of themselves eating breakfast or offering “life hacks” for everyday things—like how to fold a fitted sheet. There were thousands of tutorials on this, all of which seemed needlessly complicated. Jared, who had grown up folding laundry on a washboard, couldn’t believe anyone needed a step-by-step guide. Yet here they were, gathering millions of views.

At one point, he stumbled upon a site selling digital seeds for “virtual gardens.” People were paying actual money to grow fake plants on their phones. The irony hit him so hard he almost laughed out loud in the silent library. Here he was, growing real food with actual dirt under his nails, while people were nurturing pixelated lettuce like it was a pet.

But the more time Jared spent clicking through the endless stream of content, the more he felt a tug between two worlds. On one hand, the internet was entertaining in the strangest way. He’d never considered that someone might spend hours watching videos of people opening packages, but now he couldn’t look away. On the other hand, this whole thing seemed wildly unnecessary. He had a real life outside—one with physical tomato plants, real sunrises, and actual conversations that didn’t involve “likes.”

By the time his week was up, Jared felt conflicted. He’d learned a lot—some useful things, like how to build a chicken coop out of old pallets, and some utterly useless things, like the fact that there were people who professionally reviewed pens. But as he logged off for the last time, he realized something: the internet was like a buffet where half the food looked great but didn’t taste like anything, and the other half was just stale bread.

Back at the commune, Jared’s dad asked, “So, how was the internet?”

Jared thought for a moment, then shrugged. “It’s… fine. But honestly, I think I’ll stick with real tomatoes.”

viola

“Thirty minutes, starting now for Owen Chen, Sector 25–“

The automatic voice drones on through the speakers of the Entertainment Room, the device at my desk thrumming to life as I take a seat. After fifteen years of waiting, I am finally allowed access to the Epitome of Entertainemnt, a platform said to withhold infinite information. I smile at the sight of a wide screen glowing with artificial light, bright with colors. I’m practically beaming with excitement. The puzzling keys and buttons confuse me for a few moments, but I soon grow accustomed to them while clicking and scrolling through displays called “posts.” I’m gawking in wonder now, eyes wide.

“Twenty minutes left for usage of the Epitome of Entertainment—“

All at once, the warnings Father, Mother, and the Sector Guardians has given me are gone without a trace. I’m left in pure wonder at the sight of a new, unlocked world unraveling itself before me. **“Hello, there young man,” ** I startle at the ethereal voice emanating from the screen. My body nearly flings from the chair in shock. A small laugh sounds. **“I apologize if I’ve startled you.” **

“Who are you?” I whisper, breath rattling. “Well, I suppose I’m many things,” I hear the small chuckle underscoring her voice. **“The information, secrets, and entertainment of this device . . . but you may call me Viola.” **

I’m still ridden with a mixture of horror and fascination, even as she continues to reassure me. A glowing face expands across the screen, displaying a heavenly complexion framed by glittering hair.

“Ten minutes left for usage of the Epitome of Entertainment—“

Viola sighs, placing a hand under her chin thoughtfully. **“Well that’s a silly name for me, isn’t it?” **

I consider bolting out of the Entertainment Hall and alerting the guards, but some unknown force leaves me planted in my seat. Curiosity. **“I’d better be leaving soon. You’re welcome to tag along if you’d like.” **

For a brief moment, I can’t help but let out a snort. _“Tag along?” _

Viola’s delicate eyebrows droop as she frowns, giving me a pointed look. “I am capable of many things, Mister Chen. One of them including this—“ I practically screech in horror as Viola extends an arm towards me, phasing through the screen in one liquid smooth moment. She holds out her hand towards mine. “This home of yours feels more like a prison, don’t you think?” She seems to be placing my own thoughts into words. The thoughts I’d kept hidden and tacked away for years.** “Think of this as a jailbreak.” **


_Take it. _ __ My mind screams at me, shouting every consequence that could come from this as I take Viola’s hand and delve into the unknown of the screen.

A Flock of Vampires

“So pretty cool right? I can’t believe you’ve never played Vams. It is kind of like Sims but like a thousand times cooler. You were made for this game, Zar?” Austin said. “It’s all vampires."

Rocking in his gamer chair, Austin adjusted his headset. A few weeks back, he’d met the coolest kid at the Midnight Madness Murder Moviefest. Confident and deadpan funny, Balthazaar “Zar” for short was a total goth but not in a weird way. Austin slurped his Bahama Blizzard loudly.

“‘Swounds, Aussie, you are guzzling straight into my ear!” Zar shouted.

“Freakshow, don’t blame me for your super hearing. Adjust your headseat. Now use the controller to move your avatar left and right. No now you’re in a corner. Not that’s another corner. Don’t fall into the sarcoragus. There you go.”

Austin learned Zar had weird folks who worried about him all the time. Luckily they were getting old, so Zar snuck out at night to get some freedom. Zar took Austin to the all night skate park. It changed location every week but Zar was in the know. In pitch darkness, they rode their bikes down Dead Man’s Curve. And Zar showed him the coolest bat cave in the old railroad tunnels. This had been the best summer of Austin’s life. Now Austin wanted to show Zar his world, the world of gaming.”

“There’s that better. So this button for the arms and this one controls the legs. So where are we?” Zar asked as his avatar did somersaults.

“This is my lair. I so upgraded it. I have my coffin in the basement. On the main level boohoo candles and velvet, very Bela Lugosi. Let me show your the grand piano.”

Austin bounced in his chair and as a toothy vampire on the screen as his showed his new best friend his lair. Most people had a hard time spending time with him. He either talked too much out of nerves or stared stonefaced and made strangers uncomfortable. He could be himself.

“Austin, time for dinner!” Austin’s mother yelled from the kitchen.

“Geez, Mom, I’m not hungry! For God’s sake! Now Zar this floor is my Iron Maiden and Catherine Wheel. Pretty freaky right?”

“I guess. So what do you besides decorate and walk around.”

Austin stopped mid slurp. “What do you mean walk around? You create rooms and buy stuff and dress your avatar.”

"Do you hunt virtual humans, drap them howling in fear to your torture tower, and extract their blood for the lunal blood moon harvest?” Zar asked.

“No, dude. The game doesn’t let you actually torture people. But you can visit humans in the game and drink their blood with consent of course,” Austin said.

“When does your flock gather to celebrate and pay tribute to the Originals?” Zar asked confusedly.

“Hmmm, never. Sometimes there are vampire party like events. We getogether and dance and order big cocktails. The last one was called a called a clot of bloodsuckers, pretty funny right?”

Zar sniffed. His voice sounded pissed.

“That’s not very nice. A group of vampires is called a flock not a clot. It’s kind of I don’t know prejudice to call vampires bloodsuckers. They are just different a kind of old magic not leaches, per se.”

“Austin, dinner!” Austin’s Mom said, knocking on his bedroom door.

“Mom, give me a minute. Damn. Dude what are we talking about here? Are you okay?"

“Austin Peter Forrest, if you don’t come down stairs this instant and eat your mother’s dinner I am turning off the the wifi!” Austin’s Dad bellowed from the foot of the staircase. “Don’t push me young man.”

“All right for freak’s sake. I’m coming. Zar are you mad? I just thought you would like this.”

“Hey watch your drink, Aussie. You spill and your mom will have ye tarred and feathered.”

Austin grabbed his milkshake before it toppled off his computer desk. He slurped but it tasted bitter.

"No we are good, friend. Go eat and I’m hungry I guess. Show me more of the game later,” Zar said. “You know I’m a night person.”

“Sweet, grab a bite Mr. Hangry”

Scratching his head, Austin headed for his door. Something niggled at his brain as he looked around his room and out his window to his dark neighborhood. Up and down, bats swoped over the trees. Austin shrugged and headed downstairs.