Jacob Thomason

New to creative writing, going to Uni next year. Want as much feedback as possible.

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Jacob Thomason

New to creative writing, going to Uni next year. Want as much feedback as possible.

Writings

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Doctors Life

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

Nothing can compare,

To the view of a families despair.

Telling them bad news,

Is nothing you get used to.

This part of the job,

Your emotions it will rob.

Keeping a straight face and being neutral,

Whilst delivering news that’s far too brutal.

Being this professional,

Can sometimes seem questionable.

People asking why,

As they try not to cry.

You think your used to death,

But every time you te...

Poetry

Quiet Destruction

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

Tectonic plates keep our world together,

But they will be our danger forever.

They lie under the sea deep below,

They collide and the pressure begins to grow.

They produce a rumble that no-one really knows,

Except on a sizeometer where the pattern shows.

Then all of a sudden a loud bang is heard,

It pops your ears and turns your blood to curd.

The air cracks and the ground begins to rumble,

As...

Action

Drama

Dive Right In

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

Standing on the rocky cliff above the sea, I looked down to see where I would land. Staring back at me was the ocean, a vast expanse of cold darkness. I’m afraid of water, not drinking water, but swimming pools, lakes and especially the sea.

I’ve been diagnosed with Thalassophobia, the fear of large open bodies of water. The ocean is the epitome of this fear.

Looking at the ocean from so high u...

Drama

Midnight Visitor

Jacob Thomason

7 min read

Being a writer, you’d think Mark would be very excited about going out and exploring new areas, going on adventures and meeting new people. Well you’d be wrong. Didn’t didn’t like any of that. Mark was always a quiet and somewhat lonely person, he never really made many friends at school or in the jobs he had when he was younger. He never really spent much time with family, unless they came over t...

Action

Thriller

Exploration To Devastation

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

Space is something we’ve always pondered,

Men women and children alike have always wondered,

What’s life like up there in the void,

Is there life or has it been destroyed.

We as humanity have always pushed the limit,

How do we get up there, a rocket lets build it,

Admittedly we’ve never always been together,

With each country wanting to do better.

Each country wanted to get to space,

Countries l...

Poetry

The Kitchen

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

Cooking in the kitchen is fun,

Although sometimes it can be glum.

Different foods can be full of danger,

But it’s worth it for the flavour.

Things like carrots are always a pain to peel,

And the myth that they help you see in the dark isn’t real.

Onions are something you can do anything with every fry,

But they don’t half make you cry.

All kitchens have a work top where you can prepare,

So you...

Levels

Jacob Thomason

2 min read

Everyone wonders what would happen to humanity if the world was damaged beyond repair. Well, I can tell you, we went underground. I know, you were expecting something like Wall-E where we went into space or something like ‘2012’ where we build massive arks. NOPE. We ran and hid.

You’re probably racking your brain trying to figure out what caused humanity, the beings at the top of the food chain, ...

Tag

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

Catch me if you can,

But you never will,

As I try to get away from your hand,

Like a weird game of Jack and Jill.

Running through the playground,

Trying to get away,

Everyone going round and round,

More and more people want to play.

This game is fun,

This game is cool,

To play in the sun,

If you’re caught you’re a fool.

We do have other games,

Though we tend not to bother,

But they are all some...

Monsters

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

During the day it’s safe,

They only lurk in the shadows,

In the light you should have faith,

You can see them out your windows.

You go out during the day,

Because you’re protected,

You’re allowed to have your way,

Because they’re presence is rejected.

You go out and meet your friends,

Or even spend time with family,

But nighttime is where the fun ends,

And even sometimes brings tragedy.

They kn...

You Need This

Jacob Thomason

1 min read

This product is what you need in your life! This is what you need to make your life easier. This Neuro-Phone will help you make and answer calls easier and listen to music easier and quicker. This device is similar to a diabetic arm thingy in that it snaps onto your body (just below the ear) and it connects to your nerves and thus connects to your cerebellum and whatever you think, it will do.

Wh...